You're sooooooo screwed!

noooo! you cant leave it like that! Im gonna yell at you like levy was planning to yell at lucy. wahh, why do authors love cliffhangers? you really should continue this...cause i like it...and i dont like cliffhangers...sorry this is a sucky review dont get mad at me.

This needs to be finished! ASAP!

WHY IS THIS IN THE COMPLETE SECTION DO YOU WANT TO TELL ME THAT THIS DOES NOT LOOK COMPLETE TO ME, I AM GOING TO EXPLODE FINISH THIS NOW.

ooooh, totally screwed, levy-chan

XD :DDDDDD

Lol that was funny :-P

Hi! I like the idea for this story very much! It's very interesting! Congratulations on your first fanfiction!

I find it hard to believe that Gajeel would have a pink diary xD Maybe someone (Pantherlily) gave it to him as a joke? xD

I didn't know how to write English as a kid, but I did not spell/write in such a strange way, (although I did know how to write another language at the time, just not English). I believe Gajeel would try to spell words as they sound. Like may be laik or something, but probably not lik as that sounds like lick, which had me laughing when I read "She liks Jet ot Droy" XDD The rest is pretty good.

How about making this a two shot? I'd love to see Levy teach Gajeel herself, and of course, I'd love to see how their romance unfolds now that Levy knows Gajeel's secret :D

Good luck with your future writing!

Running Lynx

umm, dear? I do believe that Gajeel can read and write perfectly well and when you are learning to write, and you don't know how, you don't automatically go to text talk. okeedokee, you have a good ide for a story though.

LOL "I'm screwed." LEL. Good start for a first fanfic dood