I love it hope up update soon

Wow, LSP sure knows how to act in front of guys, that's how.

Oh goody, some action, and I'm really glad how you maintained the comedy. (Especially with Lady's captions, lol)

Oh, i see what you did there :p I'm sure the boy will play an important role in the story.
P.S. - the old man scene made me laugh, a lot.

Well, that was very amusing, i must say. I still can't wait 'till the lycan boy comes. Keep it up, and I'll keep in touch with your future works.

Good show, I must say. I enjoy the way you wrote the humorous thoughts of the character. I will keep reading if you keep writing. SO WRITE! XD

I really like how you've delivered some comedy through the first chapter. It's amazing how you've captured the souls of Finn , Jake, Marceline , and the Ice King so perfectly. I hope you'll update soon, i can't wait to see how things turn out. P.S. Thanks for the review. That i greatly appreciate :)