Veri n1c3gmyst0rikN

That was great thanx for posting
I just finished the series myself and it was sooooooo good

You should continue this it was great :p include her thoughts and hallucinations when she was in the sleep and her final thoughts before she's in a forever sleep, too deep to rouse :'( indie was my favorite character and her death made me, like, HATE Allie Condie, just like I hated James Dashner after reading Death Cure, and almost, only almost, hate Richard Paul Evans for Micheal Vey: Hunt for Jade Dragon!

This was a great poem, the only part I didn't like was the last line... I feel like it would have been better if you used something other than until you go still. However, I still really enjoyed it because Indie was my favorite character... I was really sad when she died (I should have expected it because I have a bad habit of choosing people who the authors kill of :P) and this described her almost perfectly. Well done!

Breeze

This is just beautiful.

Beautiful. One can almost imagine her singing this distractedly to herself as she flies.