Reviews for A New Beginning |
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anmous chapter 1 . 3/7/2019 nice |
anmous chapter 1 . 9/18/2018 nice |
anomus chapter 1 . 5/7/2018 nice |
anomoous chapter 1 . 4/14/2018 cute |
anomous chapter 1 . 3/25/2018 nice |
anonmous chapter 1 . 3/4/2018 nice |
anoomouys chapter 1 . 12/24/2017 nice |
Lushcoltrane chapter 1 . 8/8/2016 I loved this one with the happy ending. You managed to keep it from looking like Tori was Jade's rebound sex but actually the real deal. Nice job. |
SpencerAyden2013 chapter 1 . 7/21/2014 Cute! |
Ana.aint.in.China chapter 1 . 1/30/2014 This is a great start to writing. I'd like to see more of the build-up, but maybe that's just me. Maybe just update the rating? There doesn't seem to be anything that would make this require an M rating imo |
ScottyBgood chapter 1 . 1/18/2014 Kinda fast, but that's to be expected. Jade needs time to recover from the latest betrayal before she's ready to open her heart again. Still, to me it's well written, the flashback was easy to identify, and the story had an arc and an end. It takes a lot of ambition to start with a multi-chapter story. You did good. |
Beauredog chapter 1 . 1/17/2014 nice, it's very good, just like ur other story, can't wait to see what else you have in store :D |
mennanenna chapter 1 . 1/17/2014 Loved it, kid. |
Invader Johnny chapter 1 . 1/17/2014 Gotta love when Beck is unfaithful, it leads to Jori goodness! Invader Johnny Signing Off. |