Reviews for A New Beginning
anmous chapter 1 . 3/7/2019
nice
anmous chapter 1 . 9/18/2018
nice
anomus chapter 1 . 5/7/2018
nice
anomoous chapter 1 . 4/14/2018
cute
anomous chapter 1 . 3/25/2018
nice
anonmous chapter 1 . 3/4/2018
nice
anoomouys chapter 1 . 12/24/2017
nice
Lushcoltrane chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
I loved this one with the happy ending. You managed to keep it from looking like Tori was Jade's rebound sex but actually the real deal. Nice job.
SpencerAyden2013 chapter 1 . 7/21/2014
Cute!
Ana.aint.in.China chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
This is a great start to writing. I'd like to see more of the build-up, but maybe that's just me. Maybe just update the rating? There doesn't seem to be anything that would make this require an M rating imo
ScottyBgood chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
Kinda fast, but that's to be expected. Jade needs time to recover from the latest betrayal before she's ready to open her heart again. Still, to me it's well written, the flashback was easy to identify, and the story had an arc and an end. It takes a lot of ambition to start with a multi-chapter story. You did good.
Beauredog chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
nice, it's very good, just like ur other story, can't wait to see what else you have in store :D
mennanenna chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
Loved it, kid.
Invader Johnny chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
Gotta love when Beck is unfaithful, it leads to Jori goodness!

Invader Johnny Signing Off.