| Reviews for One Fatal Flaw |
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BluemoonMusicGirl chapter 1 . 8/29/2016 Wow. Just- WOW. Mind-BLOWN. This was incredibly well written and flowed gorgeously. You are an incredible author! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2014 Woah Just Woah |
Elysian0729 chapter 1 . 7/21/2014 It left me with so many emotions... It just perfectly describes the relationship of Peter Pan and Felix. I don't think anyone else could ever describe them so perfectly. This is everything I could ask for in a Panlix story. It's so natural and true. Of course Felix would want to die along with Pan. Of course Pan would need him in this particular way. Of course Peter Pan never fails. Every piece of the puzzle was jusy set in the perfect place and made it a flawless piece of art. And all the metaphors of painting gave it a whole new point of view. And the scenario of shield between rain and thunders perfectly describes Peter and Felix's world; a secluded world hidden from everyone else. You are amazing, you know that? -Liz |
TerriLeanne chapter 1 . 1/25/2014 I am so full of emotion right now, and I can't express it bc my "family" is in the same room as me. This is really amazing...you're amazing...I hold things in...just know that this is incredible. |
nigmas chapter 1 . 1/25/2014 Do you have any idea as to how much I love your Panlix fics? Seriously. Never stop writing them. *kidnaps you so that you can never stop writing* I loved the bit where you've put, 'his boy. His Felix.' 'They are always rough. Peter doesn't know anything else, and because he doesn't, neither does Felix.' And this bit- seriously it's fricking perfect. I just really, really love it 'kaaaay? :) xoxo |
ashangel101010 chapter 1 . 1/18/2014 Contradictions and denial, but mortality definitely makes this an interesting story. |
paintingoncobwebs chapter 1 . 1/18/2014 I’m a flaily ball of spaz reading this! It’s perfect! The juxtaposition of the storm and their relationship and Peter being a scary conditioning manipulative freak and Felix unwilling and unable to escape.. yes. Perfect. The co-dependency of these two is unreal. I wish it’d been explored on the show more, it’s so fascinating. “Shall I fix you now.” - I know the context and what you were going for, but... just... I think that sums up so much of Peter’s relationships with people. ‘I feel like I’ve really been a trooper, putting up with everyone, but it’s time the big kids get things done now.’ “doesn't know whether he's doing it because he can't imagine living in a world without Peter Pan or because Peter Pan can't fathom Felix living without him.” - I’ve said it before, I’ll say it again; never ever allow yourself to be trapped alone with Peter for any length of time. This is the craziness that happens. And 200 years? Poor bb. ::snuggles Felix:: |
Jadeosiris chapter 1 . 1/17/2014 Ton histoire m'a tellement inspiré que je vais surement en faire un dessin xD |