| Reviews for Jealousy |
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   The Patchwork Rabbit chapter 2 . 11/29/2014 Some mistakes but pretty good. |
| The Patchwork Rabbit chapter 1 . 11/29/2014 Aww, poor Tetsu! :'( |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2014 OMG KUROKO IS JEALOUS! Kuroko: Momoi-chan is mine as in capital M-I-N-E MINE! (Dark and jealous aura) (hugs momoi super tightly) Momoi: K-k-kuroko-k-kun c-c-can't b-b-breath... |
| singaporean gal chapter 2 . 10/2/2014 Nice |
| cherryapplegirl chapter 1 . 2/3/2014 Kuroko u Baka |
| MangoFlavoredMochi8096 chapter 2 . 1/31/2014 K..Kawaii! / |
| recchinon chapter 1 . 1/25/2014 the plot is nice, really I like the dialogue but there is problem with how you tell the story. you need to elaborate mpre about the situation, feeling, expression, etc. that way a story would be more enjoyable to read. maybe it is trouble some to elaborate the sentence but believe me, that way you could make the reader to picture the situation easier. good luck! |
