It’s a great story !

I fucking love this story

Dude that chapter ending was emotional

I loved this story! Luke/Mara are so sweet here and ugh Vader I hate you! You tortured my poor baby so much! Glad that Mara was trying to turn Luke to the light side...It was amazing!

There are way too many mistakes. You've bungled your punctuation, mutilated a number of words, and often your grammar leaves a lot to be desired. Please edit your stories in the future.

I have been with you and this fic since you posted its first chapter. That was in Jan 2014. Today after my exams ended I got to check my email(PC ban during exams) and saw that you posted the next chapter for this October 2015. At that moment I got up from my chair, went and threw up, performed a ancient zibabwaise ceremony with my dog and went to the top my building and yelled 'JOY TO THE WORLD'. In short you should post more often or I will be locked up in jail for another night.
-Fireman64
P.S:If its going to take you that long to post the next chapter please make sure to put a 'THE END' in it.

Well...at least we know you are still alive!

So sad that this story is over! It was a fantastic story! With many twist and things I didn't see coming! I would love for a padme and Vader story but truefully any story you write that has Vader padme luke in it are great! Keep up the great work and good luck on the crossfit! can't wait for the upcoming story! Will be waiting for the new story! Please update soon with the next story! Great job !

vERY VERY VERY great STORY

Um, not meaning to be in anyway offensive, and just so you know I love this fix, but I think you should start to think about wrapping it up soon, because it's gone on for a long time, and is starting to lose that which made it so good. I'd hate to see such a good fix go downhill just because it dragged on too much.

Ben and Anakin make a cute pair. I'm not sure what Mara was expecting. ;P

What was that about freaking out about a kid having sugar? I have never met a kid who wasn't allowed sugar by at latest their first birthday. And I have literally dozens of cousins and kids I babysit, on top of five younger siblings...

Go figure Vader would be the less strict father! Mara has learned her lesson in babysitting! I love the comedy in this chapter! I wonder what going to happen next and how the talk will go and how padme will react to the conversation! Please update sooner! Can't wait to see heat happens next ! And Ben such a cute boy, wonder what next inspire for him! Update soon please

Look who is still alive and breathing!

I think Mara looks sexy in a pilot suit!