Reviews for Hey Baby (do you come here often?) |
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cshen.julienne chapter 1 . 7/3 HAHAHAHHA He's so getting points even though the pick up lines suck big time XD |
woofyy chapter 1 . 11/9/2019 Hahaha all those pick up lines are so lame. I bet he purposely said all those pick up lines at the end to make her kiss him hahaha well, his hard work paid up. Elsa agreed to go on a date with him. Good job Jack. Good luck with your future stories. I hope you'll write more stories about them. |
Inconspicuous Username chapter 1 . 5/11/2017 I AM SUCH A FAN OF PICKUP LINES! The fanfic was freakin' adorable! Thank you so much for writing it! |
soniyamalik444 chapter 1 . 1/8/2017 Awwww :3 that's sooooo awesomely cute fic ;) |
Nourmakky chapter 1 . 7/16/2016 Hahaha omg those pickup lines |
Ghost Angel14 chapter 1 . 4/25/2016 "What is this shirt made of?" "Polyester?" "Nope! Boyfriend Material!" *slow clap* |
montclaire06 chapter 1 . 4/19/2016 LOL! sweet .. I likeths shirt part whahaha... Fav FAVES ! |
YuiUsagi111 chapter 1 . 3/7/2016 Oh that was so sweet LOVE IT |
DarkSakura159 chapter 1 . 2/29/2016 Too funny~! Hahahahahaha XD |
Littlemiss-RozaAnn chapter 1 . 2/19/2016 Those pick up lines tho. I loved omg |
thunder2010 chapter 1 . 2/14/2016 :') love this! Both humourous and cute |
Random Peep chapter 1 . 1/5/2016 HA! HA! HA! HA! Sweeeeet! |
Niflheimx chapter 1 . 11/8/2015 Damn I love it ~One of the most comedic and fluffy one shots I've ever read. The last part literally made me read it again for like a few more times XD. Anyways, kudos to you! |
chiyokira chapter 1 . 7/22/2015 purrrfect |
Queenola-Witty chapter 1 . 6/29/2015 Okay so I don't read Jelsa tics, I don't have anything against them, I just...don't. But my little sister does and she managed to convince me to read this one-shot she found and after much groaning and reluctantance I did and I enjoyed it so much I'm giddy. Literally. It's simple but has so many funny moments- chuckled a lot throughout. You did a fantastic job with this one. Elsa being quite a funny thing, nice. Jack being a cocky about his looks and adorably hanging all around Elsa, love it. You've just possibly(maybe) created a new member of the ever growing group of Jelsa fans. Thanks for writing this. Also thanks for the informative author notes. |