Reviews for Hey Baby (do you come here often?)
cshen.julienne chapter 1 . 7/3
HAHAHAHHA He's so getting points even though the pick up lines suck big time XD
woofyy chapter 1 . 11/9/2019
Hahaha all those pick up lines are so lame. I bet he purposely said all those pick up lines at the end to make her kiss him hahaha well, his hard work paid up. Elsa agreed to go on a date with him. Good job Jack. Good luck with your future stories. I hope you'll write more stories about them.
Inconspicuous Username chapter 1 . 5/11/2017
I AM SUCH A FAN OF PICKUP LINES! The fanfic was freakin' adorable! Thank you so much for writing it!
soniyamalik444 chapter 1 . 1/8/2017
Awwww :3 that's sooooo awesomely cute fic ;)
Nourmakky chapter 1 . 7/16/2016
Hahaha omg those pickup lines
Ghost Angel14 chapter 1 . 4/25/2016
"What is this shirt made of?"
"Polyester?"
"Nope! Boyfriend Material!"
*slow clap*
montclaire06 chapter 1 . 4/19/2016
LOL! sweet .. I likeths shirt part whahaha... Fav FAVES !
YuiUsagi111 chapter 1 . 3/7/2016
Oh that was so sweet LOVE IT
DarkSakura159 chapter 1 . 2/29/2016
Too funny~! Hahahahahaha XD
Littlemiss-RozaAnn chapter 1 . 2/19/2016
Those pick up lines tho. I loved omg
thunder2010 chapter 1 . 2/14/2016
:') love this! Both humourous and cute
Random Peep chapter 1 . 1/5/2016
HA! HA! HA! HA! Sweeeeet!
Niflheimx chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
Damn I love it ~One of the most comedic and fluffy one shots I've ever read. The last part literally made me read it again for like a few more times XD. Anyways, kudos to you!
chiyokira chapter 1 . 7/22/2015
purrrfect
Queenola-Witty chapter 1 . 6/29/2015
Okay so I don't read Jelsa tics, I don't have anything against them, I just...don't. But my little sister does and she managed to convince me to read this one-shot she found and after much groaning and reluctantance I did and I enjoyed it so much I'm giddy. Literally. It's simple but has so many funny moments- chuckled a lot throughout. You did a fantastic job with this one. Elsa being quite a funny thing, nice. Jack being a cocky about his looks and adorably hanging all around Elsa, love it. You've just possibly(maybe) created a new member of the ever growing group of Jelsa fans. Thanks for writing this.

Also thanks for the informative author notes.
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