I can't believe someone told you to take the lyrics down! That's kind of what makes the story! And I cried! I really did. This is an amazing story!

The better the fanfiction the more it makes you want to cry...

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh nooooooooooooooooo that was good. And sad. And ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. why. That was great, you told a very good story in a short amount of time, not wasting anything on it. I want a multi-chapter sequel- that would be great. Keep up the good work!

I believe this was an amazingly written story! You had my feels going left and right, up and down; you pretty much had me at the end of my seat (no joke!). :)

Did you know that your story was nominated for "Best One-Shot" on Tansyheart's Fanfiction Awards? I found this through her, and I gotta say, I'm voting for you. ;)

Yours Truly,
Winterbornbree

The story is good, but since it has the copied lyrics of Bing Crosby's "You Are My Sunshine", it breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:

Actions not allowed:
3. Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.

Please remove all of the copied lyrics from your story before someone can use them as evidence in their abuse reports.

And in case you're wondering when and why that rule is made, here is the background information. Back on April 27, 2005, the admins put this message on the front page regarding songfics:

In addition, [this site] would like to address a growing problem. For whatever reason, some writers feel it's okay to copy-n-paste musical lyrics they have not written into their fiction. If you did not write it, do not post it. This has always been our policy. Please remove these entries immediately to avoid account closure.

Keep in mind that "public domain" means something that has expired intellectual properties, like Shakespearean works. And disclaimers don't cut it for song lyrics. Not even changing a few words from the original song will be enough.

catspats31
Member of Eliminator

That was a wonderful story

I think I need to cry! This is an amazing one-shot! :) I'm expecting a prequel!