I love your characterization of Niou, it seems so close to what I had imagined his background to be as well. The series never really went into detail about his family life or mystery and he always seemed so aloof that I found myself wondering what kind of person he really was.

Your writing style is completely and utterly unique. I love it! You don't force any unnatural emotions or actions to happen and your characters are so flawed and human that people can't help but relate and root for. Please continue this, I'm so enthralled by the storyline.

~Rose

This is an amazing story so far, there's so much detail and mysteriousness you capture about the characters. This is one of the few good Niou x OCs I've seen on here, and I can't wait to read more. x

So far, I am really enjoying this story. It is obviously well written and has been mysterious and suspenseful. I look forward to reading more.

Although it seems discontinued (after 8 months), the writing style's pretty good compared to many (and I've read a lot), and it's rare to find Masaharu in such a different setting. I think you were doing a good job in bringing out his true character in the story. It's a shame this was discontinued. If you have the rest of the chapters stored up somewhere, please update!

I reread this even though I beta-read it. It still gives me shivers to read your writing. And here offers a new look at Niou Masaharu! I'm curious how Kazue will turn out :) Good story and good luck!