omg this was the best story involving sirius that i've read. I was in tears by the epilogue. You should totally write another one involving Sirius jr's time at Hogwarts!

awwww
this was so sweet
that was a great ending

Snape is not a tall person. In book 1 he is describe as small and not pleasant to look at.

wow!
this is so sad!
i wish snuffles had known :(
And i can't believe this is over! NOOOOOO!
Will u be writing more extra scenes? please dooooooo!

yeeyyy! They said I love you. Hooray! I think this story is great, love your writing! Please update soon!

cool chapter!
sad to know the story's going to end soon

Read all your chapters in one night! Hope you'll be posting more soon

wow!
that was really noble of sirius, but i wish he had thought of another way...
i feel sad for beth!

I LOVE this story. I especially love the sweet and romantic side to Sirius. I can't wait for them to say I love you to each other. They're so cute. But I also love the funny and mischievous side to him. I LOVE it when he gets all worried about Beth like when he didn't know where she was. I really can't wait too see Bellatrix's reaction to their relationship. I REALLY hope she curses Beth, not because I don't like Beth (on the contrary, I think she's BRILLIANT!) but I'd really love to see Sirius worry over her and be angry at Bellatrix. So I'd like her to Curse Beth quite badly and seriously but NOT life threateningly. I really love the way you write this, I think you write brilliantly. PLEASE UPDATE SOON, I LOVE IT! XXXX

this.. was perfect! XD

I'm so excited to read the rest of this! Something big is coming, I can really feel it, after all it is the wizarding war! Bless Sirius for being good with the emotions, real nice character development here.

Amazing!

Not my usual cup of tea, but nice (:
Maybe you should make a good reason why they're admitting anMuggle into Hogwarts
I liked how the flow of your dialogue is ... Well, flowing
Keep writing!

n'awwww these 2 are cute :3

Was this a kinda true story like the bits and pieces that can be true. I play water polo too 3

I cried