I feverishly hope you do continue the story to bring it to an end. :D I found this story some time ago and I nearly forgot it even existing due to its continuing nature, but I am so glad I found it again. I binge-read it within hours just to realise it isn't finished yet; making me sad and happy at the same time.

The plot of this story is truly amazing and I am in awe of your skills to rewrite the whole plot of a season without making it awkward or somehow getting it totally wrong. The amount of character you put into Korra is really great and I love the detail about the atmosphere in every scene. Every character has its own personality without falling out of the given frame and the story is a smooth read through and through.

I am so excited to read more of it, even if it should come to an end soon. (:

Wow this is amazing! So tense and great character development!

Btw the other day I sent you the scenes via the docs. Lemme know what you think when you can

OMG UPDATE THANK U

Ohmygod. Mind blown. I knew, it I knew, it I knew it!

I can't even think right now. I knew Amon was sneaky, but to fake a whole crazy people building to brainwash Korra? Wow. It's a little weird to think that he was so friendly with her. I mean, she's the person he hated most, it must've killed him to be so close to her.

Tarrlok playing a part in this is making me think too much. Does he know that Kavik is Amon? Why did he let Korra be treated like that? Also, how long did it take for Amon to prepare everything? The newspapers, the fake reports and memories? He had an answer to everything.

You know, I thought this was going to be an Amorra/Noarra story, but I don't think that's going to happen anymore. Amon went too far for Korra to forgive him.

I really do hope Korra comes to her senses and beats everyone who's been against her. Also, you should really get a beta, it makes the story look more professional. No offense of course, I just think that having almost no grammar and spelling mistakes makes people want to read it more.

Anyway, I hope you will continue this story, because it's certainly nothing I've ever read before. I mean, you had me thinking that Tenzin was an awful person, that Korra was crazy, that Amon was nice and that Korra's 'friends' were bad people as well. For the first time I actually couldn't see how this story would turn out and that makes it even more exciting to read. Normally I see the plot of stories within the first couple of chapters, but this story is different.

I look forward to the day I see an update (or updates lol), and good luck with everything!

xx

Gaaah, I'm being so suspicious about everything. I feel like Korra is living a lie. And that Amon brainwashed her or something.

I wonder if Amon wears the mask thing because he has the scars from the show or to hide half of his face from Korra. It would be nice to read what goes on in his head. Most of the stories with Amon in it are written in Korra's point of view. Maybe showing Amon's side of the story is something you could incorporate in the story? Would be interesting.

Hiii,

I've just started reading this story and I'm so confused, but in a good way. It keeps me wanting to read more. I have all kinds of theories in my head, whether Korra is really hallucinating or not. And if keeping Korra in that place is really another plan to overpower the Avatar. It's so frustrating not to know lol.

There are a couple of grammar and spelling mistakes, but at this point it hardly even bothers me because I'm too busy imagining everything. It's really good how you wrote Korra's paranoia. I felt the distress she felt, so good job on writing the details like that.

I can't really judge anything else, because I'm only at chapter 5, but I will continue to write reviews, if I can even call it that, haha. I'm not so good at writing my opinions. But I try.

I see that you haven't updated in a while, which is slightly discouraging. I don't know if this story is finished, but I'm asuming it isn't. Hopefully you haven't given up on this, it's really interesting.

Please continue!:) I love this story so much!:)

Well, talk about a twist. It will be interesting to see how this will continue.

Although, I really wanted to see Villain!Tenzin... :/

Honestly, This story has got to be one of my absolute favorites. It takes such a different approach than any other story about korra and is so well written that it's completely believable that this could have happened. How could you be so cruel! Leaving us with such a cruel cliffhanger. I, for one, cannot wait for the next chapter.

Omg Omg Omg Omg Malik really is amon. He brainwashed her. And tarrlok is working with him and he knows it. He's trying to turn her against the people she really knew by making her think they are the bad guys boom this just happened

cool chapter

Of course, just as I start to believe Amon's and Tarrlok's little story, of course you drop this chapter on us. Kudos to you, ms. author.

And don't worry, I think you captured Mako's character perfectly!

Oh man, this is a great story. Seriously, it's one of my favorites right now and I'm so glad you finally had time to update. Please continue; I can't wait to see what will happen!

Awesome I am really loving this story ! Can't wait to see her make her big appearance !