It can clearly be only 1 him that she would refer to that way.

Lovely oneshot. This was better than your first two SB stories - more polished. Just some typos if you're interested though. It should be "in his beautiful green eyes that showerED heR" (not "shower he"). Thanks for sharing

This is beautiful story

I loved this story! Follow it please.

Aw. :D

I like very good job

Awwww, cute! It's like a poem cross story. I wouldn't say your writing style is rough, it's short, but that's no bad thing IMO. No problem with the 'him's', only I think there might be a typo "his beautiful green eyes that shower he with [blah]",should the second 'he', be 'her'?

Woah. Do you mean Ren, by the way you described the "him" I hope so. Please hurry and put the next chapter up! Please!

Election Law! I'm taking that this semester too, I can understand why you'd drift away haha. Also, cute little ficlet idea, I'm a sucker for fluffy Kuon/Kyoko. :)

I really like this! Short but sweet. It would have made a great prologue too. Hope you continue it. :)