It's good keep it up

nice story its really good

its a nice fanfiction i like the emotion in it and tootie i give it a 10 out of 10

To Whom It May Concern:

I loved where this was going. I really did. If the author were to continue writing it, there are two factors I feel need pointing out:

1. Emotion Commotion. Most people remember it for Trixie's "boyfriend badge", "Stop ignoring me ignoring you!", or emotionless Timmy. I remember it as "the episode where Timmy dives in a pool and comes out naked in front of everyone". Timmy. Comes. Out. From. The. Pool. Naked.

I knew FOP could be biting but lighthearted, being a Nicktoon and all, but I was once under the impression that incidents like those were isolated pre-Season 4. I more or less stopped watching after School's Out: The Musical, and the things I've read about the show since then (Poof, Wishology, Sparky, the live-action movies, Chloe, etc.) clearly indicate I haven't missed much.

My point is, my hatred of Emotion Commotion because of that one gag is so great (judge me all you like, I don't care anymore; this isn't shotacon or child porn), that I honestly hope it goes completely unmentioned here. But since bringing it up was inevitable anyway, I thought I should be the one to do so first.

2. Trixie's tomboy side. No, folks, I don't buy it. Did the writers really expect us to believe that the richest and most popular girl in school just HAPPENS to be a lovable tomboy in secret? Yeah, no. Combined with that bit of fetish fuel otherwise known as Timmy, Cosmo, and Wanda's sex changes, I wouldn't be surprised if The Boy Who Would Be Queen was more a satire of women's lib. Boys and girls do more of each other's stuff? Hello? The female characters on this and practically ALL of Nickelodeon's shows (Rugrats, Kablam, Drake And Josh, Bubble Guppies, The Loud House, a good chunk of Nickelodeon Magazine's comics like Funky And Miriam, Patty Cake, and Grampa And Julie: Shark Hunters) already have an unfairly huge edge over the males. The females are constantly portrayed as smarter and wiser than the males. The females are allowed to hit or otherwise attack the males for humor without any repercussions. Seriously, what are Trixie AND her fans getting at anymore?

That is all. Thank you for your time.

SO LOVELY

SO CUTE

ADORABLE

Please update your story soon!

i wanna see what they do to Trixie this is an unfinished story FINISH IT I SAY FINISH IT

Mark this as 'complete' so I don't have to report you.

I will wait for chapter 4.

I will wait for chapter 3.

I will wait for chapter 2.

Please continue

Ouch talk about a sore loser