ah, the irony... poor Sherlock! He just gets so carried away and expects everyone to understand... : )
Love his enthusiasm, though.. ["I found it!"]

Already hungry for more! An engaging mystery!

Vivid :)

Oh man this is really good so far! You've certainly captured my attention, please continue! I'd love to read more! Poor Grayson, and I hope Sherlock figures it out! :D

ah! very creepy and very shelock! sounds just like him too! how do you do that? *glares enviously*