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This would've been so much better if you had paired Carol Danvers with Peter Parker, seeing as that they can relate to each other with the whole their minds being messed with, amongst other things. MJ is overrated.

One word springs to mind to describe this chapter. ZOOOOOOOOOOOOOM! And somewhere trying desperately to keep up is a plot.

Good

Oh I will, If you wanna tweak the origin of the Crimson Spider I'd be willing to inform you of the changes made to the character since Chapter 12's release.

Cool look forward to redo or rewrite of this thank you for giving us a heads up boss.

Here’s an idea when spider-man makes his new suit it should be a mix between spider armor mk 3 superior Spider-Man suit and the advanced suit

YES AWESOME I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE IT
Hey I have a idea how about a story there a young man from our world who is a huge Fan of Spider-man but died but then Wakes up in the marvel universe a month before Doc ock try to switch brain with Peter ans with Spider powers and now he try to change things so as the Black Spider
His costume would be the Dark Suit from Marvel Spider-man
Please Tell me what you think

Welcome back.

I freaking love how you added in Venom and Carnage for the hallucination part, and how this time Kaine didn't need to got it alone. (Peter's got his stingers back! YAY!)

No mention of how Otto either slept with or tried to sleep with MJ while in Peter's body.

Actually, Mjolnirnand Thor’s powers are magic. Electrons have nothing to do with it.

I demand you update and finish this. This is amazing.

ohhh... this I like.

I recommend you learn Physics before you try to give scientific explanations.