When are you putting up new chapter's for assassins creed black fox

The idea is is sound, but it doesnt flow as smoothly as i would like. The dialogue is a little wooden and clichéd.

Bit of a Gary stue vibe, but I would think that a good thing if he were to be a bit more realistic in his interactions with others. Like that arrogant girl trying to intimidate him. He's a teen. Have him draw a weapon, smack her around, that would get the point across, and it wouldnt require jim to suddenly become the eloquent revolutionary(thay comes with time.) That speech didnt really do it for me.

Bottom line: not bad. Could be a LOT worse.

update soon please!

dude false advertising u cold get sued. thake down the Ubisoft fanfiction and shonin jump persents

loving it can't wait for more and how naruto is going to deal with the crescent moon kingdom i think that's where u are going. and the leaf (would put proper name but to long and can never remember how to spell it) can't forget the leaf shinobi

Star Trek the wraith of Khan is answer to your speech.

Greetings, here is hoping that this review finds you well, I must say, I like the story line and premise of this story! I only know AC up to revelations, but plan to eventually get all the AC's and play them through! Also been meaning to acquire the books. I hope that this story isn't dead, but only on hold until your muse decides to let it out of her hands, and into yours! Only real issues are grammar and words, because you have some words that don't belong in the sentences, and words missing here and there, or even badly misspelled words, but honestly, not complaining or flaming, just trying to let you know, all the chapters need clean up, but it's still a very good read of a story! Again, I hope this story isn't dead, and that you will post many more chapters when your muse decides to let you have them!

This was really good please update soon

And the story becomes fucking awful and makes me think why the author bothered writing all this crap

I'm pretty sure that now Ais going to lend at least an ear to Naruto and the Assassins so things are ab to get a lot worse for the land of water since the land of wind (suna) and the land of lightning (kumo) have reasons to be suspicious of them I look forward to the next update for this fic and the rest of ur Naruto/AC xovers

well the adv in the crescent moon will go off without a hitch on konoha's part since no1 wants to piss off tsunade

well they found Naruto so that will make sai's live easier ut jiraiya is screwed

looks like sarutobi's fears were well founded as jiraiya never intended for to allow Naruto the choice of which parent to follow in the footsteps of but now if he tries using kushina against Naruto he is going to have lot more than just Naruto out for his blood

this is getting more and more interesting

this really getting interesting