Reviews for Naberius Heir
marquis.shax chapter 24 . 6/24
I know you're not really bothering with this story anymore but I still figured I'd say something after re-reading this chapter. I had never really stopped to think about it before but what you said about Quincy's made me think about something from canon that now makes no sense to me. Ichigo's "Zanpakuto" was actually a Quincy weapon so how was he able to purify hollows or perform Konso with it when a Quincy weapon is supposed to destroy souls? Is it maybe his Shinigami powers merging with his Quincy powers or was that just something that Tite Kubo left in as a plot device for whatever reason since it really shouldn't be possible
Ashkan Dehno chapter 24 . 4/18
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far
offshorephillip chapter 2 . 3/26
Any chance on an update? It's been over a year.
SilverSurfer24 chapter 9 . 12/28/2019
And with this chapter I'm out.

I would say sorry but honestly, I'm not sorry 'bout dropping this 'Issei Fanservice Fic', because that's what this story is turning out to be.

Issie gawks at every fucking woman he comes across, leering at both Rias and Akeno in every single scene you and Ookami have written so far, and absolutley nothing happens to him. Rias accepts it, Akeno accepts it, Rukia accepts it, Momo accepts it, and the members of the Naberius Peerages accept it.

Just like that.

Issei, after all is such a great character that he stands above the judgment of all others, he can act how he wants, do what he wants and no one says or does anything about it. He is Issei Hyoudou after all, and he is needed to have the biggest-and only-Harem in this story.

You couldn't kill him off because, well, some man had to be there to act as the love interest for all those other women in the DxD Cannon storyline.

Whereas Ichigo gets turned into the bitch of everyone as soon as he 'accidentally' walks in on some woman who are changing their clothes.

I have to say, you know how to treat your characters fair and equally.

Issei acts perverted

Nothing happens to him and Rias even goes out of her way to protect him. Better yet, his perversions are only flamed and increased because everyone just blatantly accepts that Issei can't do shit if he doesn't get rewarded with some form of sexual satisfaction...for every little thing he does.

Ichigo acts perverted by accident

Everyone gives him shit, the women turn him into their bitch and make his life miserable...and Rias accepts it without problem.
Hell, they all even compared him to Issei, I think Rukia even said that Ichigo was a bigger pervert than Issei...

...seems absolutley fair and just, yep.

I can already see it, this fic will turn into a strict Ichigo x Rias and Issei x Akeno, Asia, Irina, Xenovia, Koneko, Ravel, Ophis, Yasaka, Kunou, Kuroka, (and probably some girls from Bleach as well) story.

Because that's fair.

Honestly, if you want to write a story that has a strict pairing like this one does, the be fucking fair to your characters.

Issei should have to live by the same rules and regulations as Ichigo does, but no, instead he gets the overall better treatment, as i said, Ichigo might be the main character but Issei gets the fanservice, just like in DxD Cannon.
abcdefghijklmnop chapter 24 . 12/11/2019
it's such a shame that you've abandoned this story. This IS/WAS an amazing story and since you clearly have ZERO intentions of EVER updating it again you should put it up for adoption and let someone who will actually finish it take over (just please don't EVER give a story to that bitch bad girl 61 as all she'll do is copy it word for word claiming it as hers an then never update it again after the last chapter the original author posted)
Guest chapter 3 . 8/23/2019
Great story hope to see it continue
Bjermen chapter 1 . 8/8/2019
Something that irritates me with this story is the goddamn power scaling having Yamamoto being weaker than Sirzechs is stupid as Yamamoto was destroying all of the soul society by merely existing and he was suppressing himself and then you had Soifon basically confirm that Ichigo needs Bankai to be faster than Yoruichi when Aizen speed blitzed her in his chrysalis form. And just why did you have to change Ichigo’s zanpakuto the true form of Zangetsu is amazing and works well with Ichigo being a hybrid and all but seriously the scaling and how you handled Yhwach is just terrible (and to be honest I don't understand why people don't like him yes he's no Aizen but he isn't a bad villain, in fact, he is a great villain that suffered from bleach being rushed. But overall I love the story
Bjermen chapter 24 . 7/31/2019
You should give Ichigo the Almighty as I personally believe this to be his schrift. I mean he is a natural hybrid and Ichibe planned on making him soul King and since both Yhwach and the Soul King has the Almighty it wouldn't be hard to see Ichigo have. Plus Yhwach did see Ichigo's bankai as a threat and the Soul King was scared of it so his bankai needs to be strong (probably some kind of time or reality manipulation as not much else could rival the Almighty and we did see old man Zangetsu stop time or something similar in Ichigo's battle with Kenpachi)
marquis.shax chapter 19 . 6/18/2019
I'm quite curious as to who it is that Yoruichi was in love with as clearly it would never be Kisuke I think she'd rather kill him lol. I don't think it would be Byakua either as she enjoys teasing him but that's it. The only Shinigami I can think of that got married that she might have known would be Kaien Shiba but I just don't see that. Man that's gonna drive me absolutely insane lol
marquis.shax chapter 17 . 6/18/2019
it's funny that the Visoreds never used their hollow abilities when the entire reason the Quincy hate the hollows so much is due to the fact that they're their natural weakness if they get hit by a hollow they'll die much like Ichigo's mom was doing before Isshin saved her by tieing his soul to her to keep the hollow at bay.
marquis.shax chapter 13 . 6/17/2019
I'm guessing by your whole deal about the Shihoin only being able to give birth to females that you decided to change history a little bit since in canon Yoruichi had a brother who became the clan head at some point after she'd left with Kisuke
marquis.shax chapter 6 . 6/17/2019
you know this chapter brought a question to my mind that I like how you handled. In canon as far as I know it was never discussed what happens to a peerage if their king dies whether they're passed to a family member, whether they're sent to another devil that has room in his/her peerage, are they killed, or what?
marquis.shax chapter 2 . 6/16/2019
just hope you realize that Naberius is the name of the clan that had taken in Kuroka and Koneko and was then later killed by Kuroka. Also if you didn't know the name of Rias's father is Zeoticus
Guest chapter 4 . 3/30/2019
How Ichigo acts is kinda cringy...
User name is taken try again chapter 2 . 3/26/2019
Okay, so the whole mind wipe thing makes a bit more sense now. Still, don't personally ever see it happening but it makes more sense now. Also Question: Did Ichigo use Mugen to defeat Izen. All it said the last chapter was that he was in his Vasto Lord form? I think it hinted that he still has his power but gave no definitive answer.
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