although if it was hair gel i bet it would be odor less i doubt the guy who uses dogs as summons would have hair gel with a smell that just seems like it mess with their tracking

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Outside of this just being trash since you're one of those retards that has the village torture and kill a five year old (that the Third looks after, by the way), you forgot this is a universe where they have the ability to transplant fucking eyes and make them work again. Trash.

Fuckin called it! The moment you started using miester as a word for wielder I knew you had watched soul eater. Btw, Black Star was my favorite character.

Aaaaand you lost my interest. I never have been one for someone to gain a second form so to speak. It’s jusg so cliche and not to mention makes no sense. Yokai does not carry the PHYSICAL attributes of a demon over, but rather the DNA to handle it. That being said, at most you’d probably have slits for pupils, and maybe larger canines, but eats and whatnot are just a no. I also know that you do this so later on a women can pet him and make him ‘pur’. I dislike that. But good writing, seriously.

Blue swordsman
Holy shit Naruto is gonna be trained by Sonic and the black knight

this story sounds interesting.

HAHAHAHAH ok, I was lightly chuckling over the previous chapters and I did like the second battle scene you set out (especially with the sensai and his book). Anyway, this is starting to have the feel of another anime fan fiction I read recently dealing with a single guy in a private school full of girls (don't ask!). :)

Anyway, I thought I would give you a big thumbs up.

btw, if you were wondering about my handle(Visionlessone), I happen to be totally blind. So, I have possibly a better understanding of what you are trying to convey with this character. I also like the fact you have him reading braille (just how he is going to do that with 9 inch claws is going to be something to read!). anyway, I thought I would let you know that I appreciate how you have managed to let the blind character be blind and still struggle to be nornal (you would not believe how true this is for a lot of us, being accepted for who we are, instead of what we appear).

Great job I may read the reboot should I see it

It must be incredibly hard, trying to get through life as you must. Jesus, you can barely spell.

I really dislike the while multiple last names I don't thin any Japanese cultures have ever done that.

Love the chapter. Kinda sounds like u based a little off of the movie daredevil. The part where the kid pushed an old man out of the way and gets hit with some chemicals and gets super powers but is blinde. But love the story so far. I'm interested. Keep them ciming.

The concept of this story was very enticing but your execution was so bad. The grammar was atrocious and there were many spelling errors so I suggest you get a beta and if you already have one, get a better one. Another reason to get a beta is so that they can look over your dialogue and fix it because when one person talks in a paragraph then it should just be that one person. You can't have more than one different person speaking in a paragraph, you need to start another one. Now my qualms about your story. In all of the fanfictions I've ever read this has been the most brutal. I find it hard to believe that civilians and shinobi would peel back the skin of a child because last time I checked these people were still human who followed their own Morales, no matter how pure they were. However the biggest turnoff for this story is your abuse of being the author by just putting in anything you want and thinking there are no consequences. Please carefully think through what you do in your stories and actually research because anti-youkai kunai changes the entire ninja world. If these Kunai were things in the story then there would have never been an alliance between the five nations in the first place because the bijuu wouldn't have been an enticing enough offer for the others to accept Hashirama's offer. The bijuu are nuclear deterrents. Wars are delayed and started because of these army killers which is the reason why the uzumaki clan were destroyed because if there's any power in the world that can seal and subdue a bijuu then it was too powerful. That's why something like this Kunai that can be easily purchased should not even exist.

Interesting

I'm not a grammar Nazi, but it is one of my pet P' s. Living in the age of spell check, it is a very easy thing to do. Additionally, the premise of the story has a lot of potential but it seams to be squashed.

I'll finish this by saying I hope you keep writing, I look forward to your future work.