i dont even know what to tell. trying to insert lucius as a great person. i dont know what good they see in him.. ughhhh..

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

plz update

keep this going its fucking great

You can name it Brothers In Arms

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

Update more chapters about it,thanks.

Please update soon

update!

Your story is good but I think it could be better if you get yourself a Beta Reader. You have lots of sentence errors and the story seems to be hurried, no detail, just the highlights. Maybe try reading a Harry Potter story to see how the sentences are structured so you can re-write what you have so far before you get too into the story.

pretty good so far but try to find a beta to proof read

You know, I love your story and plot, but just...please work on your grammar for your chapters so far. What sucks is when you love the story and plot, but it has...bad grammar...

Great job!

Apollo's Best Friend

Awesome chapter. I like the idea of your story but I really think you need a beta because all the errors are making it really hard to want to keep reading.

Sounds like a good story, but I won't read it. The english needs serious improvement.

Awesome story so far.