| Reviews for Allies of the Leaf |
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lara5170 chapter 4 . 7/13/2019 If this was the last update then you are obviously not back |
Cindar chapter 4 . 9/10/2017 Hope you continue to write this story, it has potential. |
kurifu gari chapter 2 . 11/5/2016 i do have a question will naruto revert back to his prankster ways because of the twins if so i so feel for the people of grimmulad place? I did not see much in the way of spelling errors. So, your good there. i hope you dont quit writing this. I am quite interested in this. |
kaori and yoshi chapter 4 . 9/15/2016 Welcome back! How was life? Everything good? |
Starving Fox chapter 4 . 8/16/2016 good to hear. looking forward to a chapter update when your able |
Guest chapter 4 . 8/16/2016 God bless and help you, i pray for a swift and healthy recovery, i plead the blood of Jesus over you that you might be healed. You have my best of wishes and mu prayers. Thank you for the story, and again, God bless you. |
Umbra.Venator chapter 4 . 8/16/2016 Well this is pleasant surprise, good to have you back :) |
VargasREborn chapter 4 . 8/16/2016 I'm not much of a beta but I just finished taking a writing course at Emerson. If you want you can email me some stuff and I can look over it for you and give you some edits. |
I WANT A PRANK chapter 3 . 1/9/2016 nuff said. |
Silawatsi chapter 1 . 11/29/2015 FINALLY, a HP/Naruto crossover that DOESN'T go with the same stale setup! I've been getting sick of every fic in this catagory being either "guards at hogwarts," "someone gets adopted," or "harry in konoha." Tsunade sending Naruto to England to hide him from Madara? Is something I've NEVER SEEN BEFORE, AND IT. IS. AMAZEBALLS. And more than being original, it's IN CHARACTER for everyone involved! (give me a moment to breathe, I'm squeeing non-stop right now) It gives Naruto room to be himself! Most fics using old "bodyguard mission" standby come with too many plotholes (the most common one: if the Naruto cast is hired as body guards, why is it necessary to enroll them at hogwarts, complete with wand and a class schedule? Plus, why do they never understand the concept of professionalism?). I've only ever seen ONE example of the 'bodyguard plot' that portrays them as ACTUAL PROFESSIONALS, doing their job competently. Naruto being sent to hogwarts as an ACTUAL transfer student - not as a hired guard undercover as a transfer student, or a "surprise! you've got magical heritage, let's ship you off to magic school!" transfer student (sorry for whinging, it's just those are so darn common they're practically the only ones out there!) is really exiting to see. The characterization is spot-on, the "fake S-ranks" are a brilliant bit of inspiration - and something I could totally see Tsunade and company doing. WHY ISN'T THIS CANON. THIS IS THE PERFECT SOLUTION TO THE CANON DILEMMA OF WHAT TO DO ABOUT NARUTO, YOU DESERVE TO HAVE THE RIGHTS TO NARUTO. RIGHT. NOW. OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG Will Naruto focus on learning wandless magic over wanded magic? Because I can totally see him refusing to "take the lazy way," especially if he's seen wandless magic preformed already. I pity whatever poor soul to break the news to Naruto that wizards prefer to use wands "because wandless magic is hard to learn." Just look at what Naruto puts himself through every time he learns a new skill or technique... They might as well outright dare the blonde to learn how to do everything wandlessly. |
Eeirany chapter 3 . 9/24/2015 Please, please write some more! I love how Naruto was hanging from the rafters! Will he be developing a friendship with Fred and George? What about with Sirius? I hope he is able to make friends with Harry ._. |
DreigoththeVampireGod chapter 1 . 9/11/2015 Poor poor professor mcgonagal |
Marz1 chapter 3 . 9/11/2015 Good chapter! Hopefully no one will get a knife in the face trying to wake him up. |
Marz1 chapter 2 . 9/11/2015 Good chapter, lots of harry angst! I hope by the end of this naruto has at least 5 dragons. |
Marz1 chapter 1 . 9/11/2015 Good first chapter, though i think you mean temper the damage rather than tamper the damage in that 6thouter to the last paragraph. |