Awesome

Very good story, I like the plot.
but every time I read Kagome’s weak and pathetic personality, I no longer makes me want to continue the story.
She is no longer a teenager, she is a doctor for the love of God and continues to act as a blushing, whining and silly little girl. almost like Chichi with Goku (scary every time he sees goku fight and doesn't understand goku's desire to train)
pd: do not take me wrong, it is not a criticism I like the story so much that it bothers me the way you describe kagome

good

I hope your personal problems get resolved without any emotional trauma or collateral damage

Srry ur having to deal with so much and it’s understood it’s sad the story has no future tho

Ah ah, well do you know anyone who could contenu it,I have been waiting for you to update,so do you and if you do will they ?

Are you going to put your works up for adoption?

Man that sucks, we lose another wonderful writer. Good luck with whatever it is you are doing now.

I am saddened that we will lose such a great fanfiction writer . I hope all goes well with you, perhaps someday u will return , if that should happen I'll be here to review and chapters

I am so sorry to hear that but you gotta do what you gotta do. I want you to know that I have enjoyed your story and hope everything gets better for. If you ever decide to return I'll still be here. Good luck.

There were already 40 chapters up when I found this, so this is my first review. But aiyee! I'm loving this story so much. It's one of my favorites in such a long time and this chapter had been my favorite so far. So sweet, so amazing, so touching, and it all felt so real in the moment. Just like a good story should. I'm totally doing a chibi happy dance inside right now! Thanks. Anyway, gotta get back to reading. Bye!

Do more

Update please

I look forward to when this story comes back from Haitus

Please finish this story! I know you probably don't want to finish it but it's so good and I hope you come back to finish the story.