May I ask if you'll be continuing this? I love it!

Wow, how had I not read this story before?
Very good my friend :-)
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Hooh, this gave me chills! Fassad's appearance, Claus's reactions... it was fantastic! Everything is getting so very complicated for the twins, and I'm anxious to see what happens next. Especially how Claus is going to react to finding out how Hinawa died...I can't wait! I can't emphasize enough how much I love your characterization, your plot, your voices... it's amazing, and I hope we get more updates soon! Thank you for writing!

This is probably my favorite Lucas and claus fic! I can’t wait for the moment when Kumatora and duster find out about claus!

Please write more, I wish I hadn't found this in development,and instead found a fully finished version so I wouldn't have to wait

AHDHDJXCNSHSH this fic is AMAZING. Probably my most favorite mother 3 fic I've read yet. I love how it seamlessly deviates from the origjnal story and just works so well. And all the character interactions are juat SO GOOD I just couldn't stop reading until I reached the end.
Thank you so much YOU WONDERFUL PERSON for sharing your amazing writing!33333
I'm looking forwards to see what you have in store for this story.

What I got to say is that it is good but some parts are unnecessary

Yo so honestly? I put off reading this chapter. Mostly because I have this thing where, if I'm not sure when it'll update, I put off reading the current most chapter- and tbh I regret that? I read this chapter again after a few weeks, probably after a month, on putting it on pause, and continuing to read it is just. Ugh. Heart Emoji, you know? I'm not sure why you're not content with this chapter, but I personally really liked it!

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It is great to see this still going even if it takes a while to update, I would rather wait a while than see you burn out and give up as soo many others have. either way good luck

I'll admit right off the bat - when I checked my phone and saw this updated, I dropped it with an audible gasp in the middle of a store. People were staring. In hindsight, it was kind of hilarious.

With that out of the way, this chapter was superb. I was immersed in the writing and found myself just as emotionally invested in it as when I first started reading. The change in Claus's thought process over the last few chapters is subtle, and very well written. It's clear he's conflicted, poor guy, and his reasoning isn't quite holding up, whether he wishes to acknowledge that or not. It's clear though that he wants what he thinks is best for Lucas, and his frustration that Lucas doesn't see what he sees is almost palpable and beautifully written.

This entire chapter was very vivid and amazing to read. Thank you so much for writing! I hope to see another update soon, this really is one of my absolute favorite fanfics.

WOOO

Aaaaa, dude, I've been reading these chapters for a day or so- never commenting, because to turn on the wifi to comment would be to let the school block the site- but I'm just. Ugh. This is one of the most well-written Mother 3 stories I've ever read. The date of its last update upsets me, but that's okay, I understand that writing can be... not sure how to word it, but. I post on Ao3, so. Yee. Anyways, I just gotta say- Lucas is smart boy. He is a really, really smart boy. He knows who the commander really is. I just wish he would admit it to himself. And I wish that people would stop interupting Claus' train of though when it even so much as gently blows at the idea of him, like, remembering Lucas, and having a name and all that.

thank you for making me sad