This story reminds that you don't need hundreds of pages to make a good story. It's brilliant how simple and short this is but it still carries itself so well.
It's great how you don't explain characters' thoughts out but let the reader make conclusions. Before reading this I hadn't even given much thought how similar Pitch and Elsa are and yet so drastically different. You did a great job handling that how drawn Elsa and Pitch are to each other. I'd say that Pitch had even greater role than Jack even though he didn't end up with Elsa. Less is really more and you know how to handle it. Well written and subtle and that way really powerful.

This story is gorgeous!

SUCH a good story. I have read this one and your two other ROTG/Frozen stories. You should write more! They are so good No matter if you're writing Jelsa or Pitch/Elsa, you're such a good writer.

WOAH! Epic chapter!

I read this story a year ago and I was speachless! And now I’ve read it once more and made me cry...I fell in love with it ! I love the way you made them fell in love with each other T.T a truly love story !

This story was the first fanfiction I ever read and it really pulled me in. I love it

Wow. I just read through the entire thing in one shot and gosh, this is just pure AWESOMENESS. The note that says "there will be more" at the end if each chapter just makes me so happy. I can't believe this story is already completed. Oh gosh. But this... Just awesome.

Let me just say how rare it is to have an author who writes really long chapters. I love when there are longer chapters. It reminds me of reading a book. This story is also very enjoyable. As I said in my last review it's very original as well as enjoyable. Can"t wait to read more!

I like your twist on the story. It's new and original.

At the end of the chapter,I dont understand it.

I will give into him but not yet.

Now he'a still mine

These words confuses me

Those were supposedly happy memories? I think my heart broke at the first one and shattered by the end of it.. QQ

Note to Jack.. The phrases "I'll be quick as a bunny." and "She would never hurt me." are jinxed. Saying any of those phrases would guarantee the exact opposite of the expected outcome.. xD

In Elsa's defense, she did try though.. to isolate herself.. just that Jack and Pitch couldn't stay away for too long.

Omission of details is a form of untruth. Elsa, Elsa, why do you keep lying.. xD

Elsa, tendency to omit important facts and her way of explaining how A became E without reflecting on transitions of BCD is really going to be her downfall..XD

Somehow they're fighting over Elsa.. But somehow they aren't.. XD

When Jack echoed the same question Anna had to Elsa during the coronation ball, I had thought Jack had somehow sneaked a peak at Elsa's memories. xD

Ours? Theirs? There really is some merit to Jack's claim. Pitch is willing to share! xD

Hmm.. Now that Pitch sort of spelled out Elsa's dilemma.. It's kind of a lose:lose situation.