Charlie showed no signs he loved Harry and then says he did and didn't know Harry needed to be verbally told. Anyone who has ever had a deep love or even witnessed another's deep love knows you don't have to say I love you in words that it is the little gestures yet he didn't even do those, he didn't speak about their future, tell him when he was leaving, hold him without sex being involved, kiss him randomly, or even touch him or smile at him outside of the bedroom!

Your fic was good. There definitely were a few errors in the whole medical part, but hey, it's your story. I feel as if the whole thing kinda got rushed from chapter seven on. I enjoy your writing style but the dialogue was bland, I didn't feel a whole lot of emotion and emotion can be detrimental for a fic like this. I did like the story line though! :)

amazingly written

Bueno, bien dice el dicho "nadie sabe lo que tiene hasta que lo pierde"
y si Charlie hubiese demostrado o le hubiese dicho sus sentimientos a Harry ahora no estaria llorando sobre la leche derramada.

My dear,
You never had a nursing class before. They don't start off by throwing naked bodies at the students or calling out the virgins. The very first class is usually on ethics. Mostly on boundaries with the patients and coworkers, which I think you might want to look into one.

But as for the story itself, without the cringing medical mistakes, it's very good.

Amazing another onbe that needs a sequel

S. Ravenclaw

Thanks for the story, I found it very interesting. I'm super happy da Harry found true love and affection in his relationship with Draco. I kind of felt sorry for Charlie, but I hated the way he treated Harry and how much he made Harry suffer ... so he deserved what happened to him

Good story.

great story! can you add a sequel where charlie tries to get harry back, by doing something bad? that would be awesome.

Awww! So cute! I love the ending! :)

That was good until you rushed the last chapter way to much.

Love it

Thanks for sharing.

nice story! loved the drama!

I'm happy that Draco was able to help Harry get over Charlie. I'm happy that they are married and I'm also happy for Ron and Hermione. I really liked this story.