Wtf was that?!

Ok I am so confused is the kids name bobby or david

I want ro know what happens pleaseeee! I will be paying attention to the sequel or update. Thanks

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is this like the cell phone sawp?

This is so confusing and I'm the best reader of my school and stop with the flash backs its getting annoying and super creepy for some unknown reason it's not a very good story given to the fact that THERE IS TOO MANY FLASHBACKS and make the chapters longer

Wow nice story :) kinda want Annabeth to have her own claim to fame yah know? More fans idk. Great story!

Whaaaaa y you only give sneakpeeks

Rumor? Hmmm...Chloe Howl...hmmm. Sounds almost familiar ;D

Gibbs style? Do explain, love.
Hahaha, those guys. Running around on wheelies/heelies.
By the way, I like your writing style. Its simple, not too much detail and information in one sentence. Its almost...fresh.
Fresh? Where did I get that from!?
Ignore me, great chapter!

"Found me. Bye." He grabs my hand we run.
Cute! I like. She likes Nico?

'So did you here? Percy Jackson was here.' I like that.
Interesting ;)

Can upost a chapter on here telling us when u post the chapter to the sequel so we can find it and not forget bought it

I also love that saying: we know so little that it's like seeing through fog ️

I think this was perfect! It was a beautiful ending and I almost cried. It actually made sense to me. And if u make a sequel I probably won't read right away because I think the story had a perf ending! BEST STORY EVER