Reviews for Class of the Titans: Next Generation
MalinaEverfree chapter 6 . 10/27/2019
Plz update, this is my favorite COTT STORY!
katmar1994 chapter 6 . 11/23/2015
I love this story! I can't for the next chapter please update really soon!
LittleDarkHood chapter 5 . 11/16/2015
"Oh great, another Jay!" Neil can be funny at times! XD
Guest chapter 6 . 8/13/2015
Please keep going I haven't read one as good as this
nejitenfan chapter 6 . 10/15/2014
Can't wait for the next chapter
who tf knows chapter 6 . 8/19/2014
ahh I really like this story.
Jughead4Life chapter 6 . 6/23/2014
The Story is Awesome/Amazing !ยก:)
HoneyGoddess57 chapter 6 . 5/14/2014
I thought that I would change my mind but like always it irritates me to no end, seriously adding text by example: *Training Hall*. It annoys mostly all readers when it's like that.

The others things to point out? The characters how to say this are... boring/annoying- the heroes' (now parents in this story)/ other characters from the show are okay but not really good. The children are still annoying because mainly they are getting off my nerves.

I didn't come here to "flame" you- and it's not a "flame" what I'm writing. This is just something I wanted to spit it out loud but hey! There must be other people that must have told you this how off this story looks. Look, I'm just irritated because you seem to ignore everyone's tip/critics/help... etc.
Absolute Honesty chapter 6 . 5/13/2014
As I have stated in every review of this story, you need to edit your work before publishing it. Not only is it a requirement of this website to have proofread works before uploading them, it is rude and inconsiderate to your readers.

Sentences must end with a full stop. This: ".", not a comma, ",".

Do not write "*location*" or "*time later*", it is lazy writing. Incorporate it into your story or do not use it.

Your original characters lack substance. Give them personalities. Spend time exploring their characteristics. Give the audience a reason to like them.

Your canon characters are out of character. Fix this.

I hope to see this chapter is edited before the next is published.
UnderTheJackPine chapter 6 . 5/13/2014
Glad you updated. Just when I was thinking I want some more action you had Elise and Oliver fall off the ship. It was a little rushed though, work on building up the suspense!
deacctivated chapter 5 . 2/5/2014
Moreeeeee! I am immensly enjoying this story. Ooh, and make it more romantic!
nejitenfan chapter 5 . 2/4/2014
Update soon
Crystalmoon39 chapter 4 . 2/2/2014
Aw! I love it! I want to see the other kids have their reunions too!
Guest chapter 3 . 1/30/2014
Aw, what a reunion! Are you going to do the other parents all at once or individually?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
Nice! Chapter1 and I'm already hooked.
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