| Reviews for Hello, Goodbye |
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Guest chapter 2 . 1/20/2015 Awe nuts, what are the chances of you writing another chapter a whole year later? Slim me thinks but it would be so awesome if you did! Love the story so far, everyone is so perfectly written, well done! :) |
MiniCouettes chapter 2 . 4/1/2014 Well... i have to apologize... i read your fic some days ago and i didnt let a review. So here i am. Back to let you a review, cause your fic is really good, and i m disapointed you have only 2 reviews, from the same reader. Your fic really deserve more than that. Really. I like the way you write too, and its pretty easy to understand, (i m french). I f*cking love the way T thinks, and his f*cking seductive-but-not-really behavior. So, i think you already know that now, but i m waiting for the next chap. Good work! |
Sera22 chapter 2 . 1/15/2014 I cannot understand why you are not getting more reviews. It is sad, and it shows that the amount of reviews is not always an indicator. Wonderful chapter. Trevor was perfectly held in character. I really could imagine him speaking your written words with his unmistakable voice (thank you Steven Ogg!). I think it is very difficult to write it from Trevor's point of view, but you managed to capture his feelings and character in a very believable way. I hope you continue! Sera |
Sera22 chapter 1 . 1/13/2014 Well, a promising start of a chapter! I like your style of writing a lot, neat and straight to the point but also with coloring description. Well done! Sera |