Reviews for Kiss the Girl
vikinglovero4 chapter 5 . 6/23/2016
A man of honor... Brought me to this story. And I LOVE IT! First time reading an Ariel and Eric fic. Hope you update soon! :)
rational chapter 5 . 3/17/2015
What is Ariel and Eric's history? It seems a little different than the show.

So, where are Killian and Emma, if they're not in the diner and Killian's not on the ship?

Huh, Ariel opened the account at Granny's for Eric? Why?

I've enjoyed this story more than I thought I would. Eric and Ariel are interesting characters. There's so much more to then the way you draw them than on the show. I look forward to learning more about them!
rational chapter 4 . 3/16/2015
Why does Eric call him "Jones" instead of "Hook"? When did that start?

Aww, Ariel's jealous of Emma? I love this friendship that's developing between Eric and Emma. I'm also amused by the way it drives their respective loves a little crazy. Poor Ariel, though, thinking he's moved on.
rational chapter 3 . 3/16/2015
It was interesting to see the morning when Emma woke up on the Jolly Roger from Eric's perspective. I was wondering what Killian did to him when he woke up with a hangover. Nice.

Aaaand, of course, he blames himself for what happened (is happening?) with Ariel. He did have a lot in common with Killian.

I enjoyed the flashback about them, by the way. I'm so curious about their past together.

Eric's looking to buy a place? Where does his money cine from in Storybrooke?
rational chapter 2 . 3/16/2015
God, this breaks my heart. It's so painful to watch her struggle, especially while she's so certain they can't be together.
rational chapter 1 . 3/16/2015
Poor Eric. Why is Ariel so determined to push him away? What happened to her?
Guest chapter 5 . 3/7/2015
Love it xxx
Wrinkled Fabric chapter 5 . 7/31/2014
Wow, the feels! I just want to bash their heads together! And he still doesn't know ages a mermaid does he? Ooh there be trouble ahead ;) like all your fics I love this, can't wait for more :)
Lisa1972 chapter 5 . 7/30/2014
*snort*
Lisa1972 chapter 4 . 3/19/2014
*sigh* Oh yes...lets assume we know what other people want...
Lisa1972 chapter 3 . 2/19/2014
Yikes! That's good! :)
Lisa1972 chapter 2 . 2/6/2014
Oh wow...that is interesting...
Angel Bells chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
AWW!