| Reviews for Too soon |
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Lizzie chapter 1 . 4/4/2019 This was an amazing fic, I really enjoyed it! |
Luiza chapter 1 . 7/12/2016 Super verhaal. Vervolg? |
tiffaney.103 chapter 1 . 2/5/2016 I loved this story so much! I really think you should right another chapter! |
sleipnirfenris chapter 1 . 3/9/2015 angst ridden! couldn't keep my eyes off it! |
CovenantGirlLoki chapter 1 . 11/22/2014 Its beautiful and angsty and family and comfort and all that good stuff :3 |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/27/2014 This is a good story and I think it definitely deserves another chapter. I'm very keen on stories with Carlisle comforting Jasper, so that being said, how about: Jasper isn't in fact running home at the end of this, and Carlisle goes looking for him. He finds him, feeling depressed (crying etc.) and comforts him. |
visitor chapter 1 . 1/26/2014 What if jasper decides to punish himself? Really enjoyed this :) |
BlackDiamond15 chapter 1 . 1/25/2014 This is great. Poor jasper, he's only trying to be a good brother... Each of your stories makes me hate Maria more and more... Maybe an insight into Jasper's thoughts after the fight and Alice trying to comfort him. |
bellev chapter 1 . 1/15/2014 great story |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2014 Great wrinting! For another chapter...what if this experience opens Pandora's box, and Jasper ending up having more flachbacks? |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2014 Loved it, fantastic |
Bree-XXL chapter 1 . 1/13/2014 Maybe you can make it into different scenarios where jasper wrestles or fights with each one of the family members and something triggers his memory and he injures the person he is fighting then he comes out of his flashback by someone or something. Also is Bella in this story? If so, is she human or vampire? Also, if Bella is human maybe you can make it where something reminds jasper of his past and Bella is there and he attacks her... Sorry if these ideas are rubbish these are just thoughts and you can elaborate off of them. On another note, I liked this story |