Reviews for Too soon
Lizzie chapter 1 . 4/4/2019
This was an amazing fic, I really enjoyed it!
Luiza chapter 1 . 7/12/2016
Super verhaal. Vervolg?
tiffaney.103 chapter 1 . 2/5/2016
I loved this story so much! I really think you should right another chapter!
sleipnirfenris chapter 1 . 3/9/2015
angst ridden! couldn't keep my eyes off it!
CovenantGirlLoki chapter 1 . 11/22/2014
Its beautiful and angsty and family and comfort and all that good stuff :3
Guest chapter 1 . 2/27/2014
This is a good story and I think it definitely deserves another chapter.
I'm very keen on stories with Carlisle comforting Jasper, so that being said, how about:
Jasper isn't in fact running home at the end of this, and Carlisle goes looking for him. He finds him, feeling depressed (crying etc.) and comforts him.
visitor chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
What if jasper decides to punish himself? Really enjoyed this :)
BlackDiamond15 chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
This is great. Poor jasper, he's only trying to be a good brother... Each of your stories makes me hate Maria more and more... Maybe an insight into Jasper's thoughts after the fight and Alice trying to comfort him.
bellev chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
great story
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
Great wrinting!
For another chapter...what if this experience opens Pandora's box, and Jasper ending up having more flachbacks?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
Loved it, fantastic
Bree-XXL chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
Maybe you can make it into different scenarios where jasper wrestles or fights with each one of the family members and something triggers his memory and he injures the person he is fighting then he comes out of his flashback by someone or something. Also is Bella in this story? If so, is she human or vampire? Also, if Bella is human maybe you can make it where something reminds jasper of his past and Bella is there and he attacks her... Sorry if these ideas are rubbish these are just thoughts and you can elaborate off of them.
On another note, I liked this story