This is what the Fairy Dance arc SHOULD have been.

Y'know, I didn't think anything could be worse than a rapey Sugou. Apparently, that isn't true. Great. It was going so well, too. God damn it, this had better change completely between now and the end. I do NOT want to have wasted my time reading a rework of the Fairy Dance arc only to have it be even WORSE than the original.

Somewhere in this chapter you wrote that yui was suddenly tall enough to wrap her arms round kiritos neck when she stands on her fingers.

Just want to point out that you should change it towhen she stands on her toes.' It's quite confusing like this.

Tiny mistakes like that aside, I love your story and your way of writing.

ahhhhh im so sad this is ending

all I have to say is... if you have heart condition, don't read this fic in one go.

The action is amazing and the story doesn't stop giving you a slap in the face every 1000 words or so. I'm so glad I read this fanfic. it seriously fixed fairy dance arc for me.

All the original characters are very well made and their storylines are well thought out. There are these links in the story that no one would expect.

It was a wonderful experience. Thanks for this amazing story.

amusphere limitation for auto logout. darn.

so who is Ame exactly ? since she knew Kikuoka

woah O_O Asuna best friend/Support is here yes

Asuna first party. yup Asuna shine in leading group.

Damn, that was one hell of a read.

Soooo good. Well written, and you really made the world your own while keeping everyone in character!

AHHHHH IT'S SO CUTE

just realised something, in cannon ghost kyaba explains that when the nervgear kills you, it's actually a high intensity scan of your mind, and rarely it can recreate or transfer said mind into the digital plain, i think that's what happened to kirito, he "died" his hp hit 0 etc, the game does thr scan, it works and boom, can't find console

Thank you for the ride!

You have no idea how much of a roller coaster of emotions was reading this book was, at times I wanted to so badly torture Suguo myself for everything he has done, the romance could be worked on but as it is is fine enough.

I loved the story to bits and pieces I just wished there were more scenes of yui and Asuna and Kirito scenes where yui acts more like there daughter than an AI thats a tool for them.

I really wished there were some scenes added like Kirito using the gleam eyes form in a fight or the final scene where Kirito gets admin powers from kayaba.

Overall the story was enjoyable, sad I couldn't be part of it's development but happy that it finished nevertheless.