Reviews for Grade Five's Shunning Cave
wtf chapter 1 . 6/4
what the actual fuck
mXfFe chapter 1 . 9/3/2018
Veri n1c3uZqst0rian
Alpo chapter 2 . 7/20/2017
UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE
The Eds Rock chapter 2 . 4/9/2015
This is a good story. I know it says "Complete" but are you going to continue it? I have an idea for how you could.

Dollar-nator is a time machine so he and Chum Chum could go back in time and find out what Mr. Mufflin did to Fanboy.
tere moto the sentry chapter 2 . 2/17/2015
Please continue! Poor little Fanboy...

_tere
Mr Mufflin chapter 2 . 12/10/2014
Purple Kid is not going to tell anyone what happened, because if he does-well, he knows the consequences. I have a power over him that I've never had before, and I'm not about to lose that.
TheForesakenTwist chapter 2 . 12/9/2014
yer NOT DEAD! :D I'M SO HAPPYYYYYYY!
FluentFletcher2 chapter 2 . 12/9/2014
Erg...You didn't follow my advice about not continuing the story! Now you have to work even harder to write your behind off to complete a perfect story that should have already been completed in the first place! I'm sorry but I'm sticking with my opinion. I love the way you ended on a mysterious note, but then you had to go and update it...what? 10 months later!? Goodness, you HAVE been working on this for a while. Well I suppose you don't really have a choice now to end it because then that wouldn't make any sense. Continue on, I suppose.
FFFF chapter 2 . 12/9/2014
Persona;;lly think you shouldn't have contuned it, but whatevs. ;) See you at school
Nonameagain chapter 2 . 11/30/2014
Just glad to see that your updating
I'm far too lazy chapter 2 . 11/26/2014
I have such feels for Fanboy and Chuk Chum. :'( it's so unfair the way those children are being treated and even worse for Fanboy because all he wants is for his best friend to be protected from their teachers wrath. I like how you threw Kyle also being confused because of Fanboy's new behavior and I'm stoked to see what's going to happen next. Please update sooner then you did last. Almost 7 months is a long wait.
A Person Who Likes Comedy chapter 2 . 11/24/2014
OH MY GOD YOU FINALLY UPDATED! WELCOME BACK!
GlitterStarChar chapter 1 . 6/23/2014
Continue, please :-)
TheCipcakeWares chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
OMYGODOMYGODOMYGODOMYGOD! It's okay Fanboy I'll protect you. *rocks him to sleep* Screw your face and every thing it stands for Mr. Mufflin! YOURE ABSOLUTE TRASH YOU CHILD MOLESTER! CHILD ABUSER! I HOPE YOU DIE DIE DIE! Seriously wrong that freak.
FluentFletcher2 chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
I believe you should not continue, and please, before you become angry, let me explain myself. I do not want you to discontinue because the writing is bad, if fact, the writing is rather good. But the story ended on such a mysterious note, I believe it should stay that way. It keeps the reader guessing and wondering about what could have happened or what might happen. What will happen to Fanboy? Will his friends find out? Will they not? Will his teacher be arrested? Will his teacher beat him time from time again in the near future if Fanboy does not behave well? Will Mr. Mufflin actually kidnap more students and torture them? Will he keep Fanboy quiet by hurting his friend? Will people grow suspicious by the constant bruises and cuts? What about Fanboy's mentality? Will that be explained? Will his mood be altered? The readers have so many questions. Will you answer them or will you leave them with what they already have? If you should like to continue, there is nothing wrong with that. This is just my opinion.
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