FINALLY! I’ve waited since I was in middle school, left Sao, get into it again because of Ln, left it again then got in to it again because of Alicization then left for Kimetsu no yaiba, then got into Sao AGAIN because of Wou part 2 and Read your fanfic AGAIN then like it again, then followed it and then you’re alive.
I appreciated that you never really left the story, good luck with the rewrite.

I'm glad you were able to find motivation! ᕙ()ᕗ
A quick question; will the story still be relatively the same or have you decided to rewrite the whole plot a bit?

May you have the best of luck with rewriting! （っ）

Cloudy Lightning is alive, nice :D

I always hated that one of the excuses on why they couldnt get the nervegear off was it had an internal battery so they cant just cut the power, no matter how good that battery is it would eventually run out, and probably very quickly with how large and complex a game sao is. Noone would be trapped in there for more than a day.

OH MY GOD WHAT HAPPENED?! WHERE DID YOU GO?! THIS STORY IS SO GOOD IT CANT END LIKE THAT!

I am a little peeved that this hasn't been updated in 4 years! I mean, I like the story, and I wanted to see were it was going, you can't just stop on a great story like this, there was so much passion, I am not going to be an awesome and say why haven't you updated this and go into a big rant about it because I am sure you have your reasons, but I would like to say that I really did enjoy this story and hope there is more in the future

When is the next chapter? I wanna see what happens next!

For the record it is Agil.

This is really good! Please update it soon!

please update this story it is really good u need to update it

WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!

...oh...no...le...as...don't...please don't tell me that they are siblings...

Next Chapter? Please? It’s been 3 years, so please?

Please keep going! I just read through and desperately need more!

How'd college go? I hit further education myself recently and it's alright so far, but the workload is piling on fast. I can't imagine the second year, let alone anything after.

The story itself is amazing. I love Kirito knows Kayaba stories, simply because they open so many doors. And you basically did what amounts to opening every door there, then smashing the walls too. I realise this metaphor got away from me like a line in, so I'll be brief. Your story has so much potential and capitalises on it beautifully.

I really like Kirito here. Something about the fact his real body is the truly limiting factor in everything, and even Kayaba being unable to fix it is a very interesting idea, and for some reason I really love his character too. He feels OOC but you basically made SAO in a way where it lives up to the hype. The main reason Kirito feels OOC is he now has character in general.

I'm gonna stop ranting, but I do really hope you continue. If not, please drop a note in the AN or something. I feel like I found a gem here, and I'd love to see it shine when complete

Hoooly COW! I swear, on my honor and life, that when you ended it on a cliff-hanger, I literally yelled, “WHAT IN THE WORLD JUST HAPPENED?!”

And... XD that was the next line!