Amazing story. Thank you very much I really needed that.

This was an absolutely gorgeous piece of writing. To me, and I'm sure to plenty other readers, the work felt like a script. Only better. I'm a new Sherlock fan and have just finished all three seasons on Netflix, and this was a great piece to start off my Sherlock Fanfiction viewing journey. Thank you very much, and I hope you write another Sherlock piece sometime soon.

I don't ever review but this is the best deleted scene fic ever. Keep it up. X

I recently started watching this show (about two weeks ago) and it quickly became a wonderful obsession! :) This episode was amazing and you made it even better! I love this story!

This story is awesome. It rocks these socks I'm wearing. I love the way you portray John's thoughts. Definitely going on my favorites list!

"did okay"? This was perfection! If I could only pick piece Sherlock fanfiction to ever read again, I'd pick this one. I feel this is exactly what could've happened and you wrote it so well too! Keep it up!

Nicely done!

PERFECT. Pure and utter perfection. I am at loss for words. *applauds*

YOU WERE BRILLIANT

Ohh how I wish this scene was in the episode :-) and there should have been more scenes from when after Sherlock collapsed in 221B, him recovering.

Loved it and you are right we did miss out on the worried!John bit but I think you just did it justice..brilliant as always and an awesome read.

Beautiful filler moment for what was a roller coaster of an episode. :)

Brilliant :)

I wish it was actually a real scene... or maybe not I might've cried... Sherlock gives me a lot of feels sometimes sooo yeaa

You very definitely did okay. Whilst I too loved last night's Sherlock I also found it just a bit of a leap, and would have liked a scene with Watson, and your take on it was just great. Like you I can see why they didn't, though one option might have been for Sherlock's heart to start beating again in the operating theatre, but for him to open his eyes whilst John was sitting at his bedside ... just a thought...

By the way, I'm a huge NCIS fan, but sadly the series no longer excites me and whilst I continue to watch the show it is to the amazing NCIS fanfic writers that I turn to for my NCIS fix, i.e., to those writers that provide the emotion and excitement that the "professional" writers seem no longer able to provide, and I would therefore like to offer both my thanks for past endeavours and my encouragement in the hope of future stories.