Are you completely insane? Lucius Malfoy HATES Harry Potter. He's tried to kill him more than once. Harry was responsible for his being sent to Azkaban. To suggest that they would ever become any type of "buddy" is the most ludicrous idea ever in history. It's impossible. It would never happen. Anyone who believes it could is a moron.

This was hard to read. I can identify with Harry because I lost a child.
Granted it was not because of anything horrific, but my child died. The pain was intolerable, unmeasureable, and unrelenting.
It's been several years and the pain has lessened, but it's still there.

I would have voted for the decisions you made in your story but I found it on the 25th August 2019 when it already was a completed piece of writing. So therefore I could not vote but needless to say once I found your work I read it without stopping so don't ever think your work maybe is not good enough because it was excellent, moving and very good.

I enjoyed it very much

Oh I totally loved this story. Thank you for writing & sharing it.

How about SURPRISE twins or triplets?

Brilliant

Ding dong the bitch is dead. Which old bitch? Ginny bitch! Cannot mourn Ginny at all. In a way it was better that she smothered Jamie. Can you imagine the trauma & future problems a little boy would suffer if his mother committed suicide in front of him? As vindictive as Ginny was, I can picture her doing this simply to get Harry.

Harry is a freaking idiot. This story is hard to read because of his stupidity

Stupid Harry...all for fake family. If he didnt marry Ginny, none of this would happen. He knew she was no good. The kids were not hers. They should be burried in Weasley family plot as they are not Potters. Harry should give Lily to Molly. It's pride talking when he's concerned about Ginny winning when she's dead. I think he shouldnt take Lily as she's part Ginny...why spend for her?

I really enjoyed reading this! I'll definitely check out other fics you have :)

SQWEEEEEEEE! OMG LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! This was an awesome story, even with the angst. Very well done.

"Time is healing wounds" is a great misconception. It just lets scar tissue grow over it so you will forever be reminded of your loss and then there are the phantom pains. Some have the ability to push the matter at the back of their minds though. I'm kinda sorry but I'm a bit emotional and depressed today.

I'm touched by the way you describe Harry's despair over the loss of his child. I never had to deal with parents losing one immediately after it happened but I understand the feelings coursing through them. My grandparents and my parents and the wife of my uncle lost their children before they were even born. And when this happens due to accidents or other unfortunate happenings it's really hard to live with yourself afterwards. But to lose one at the hand of someone you trust with their care... especially your own partner... I understand completely that he's feeling guilty. You can describe emotions and thoughts really well.
Thank you for sharing. I'm really in an emotional turmoil right now.

this story has made me choke on, and laugh with tears and joy. really well written piece.

especially the first half of chapters has been a bit of a difficult read for me, as there were similarities to my own family. it is always hard to lose a family member and i think you have written about the struggle with grief very well without putting too much pressure on the tear glands.
thank you for that!

lovin it