| Reviews for Courtship of the Mysterious lady |
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Guest chapter 4 . 6/23/2016 Plz update really enjoy the story . |
Andrew chapter 4 . 1/29/2014 Who is that guy that hitting on ichika's sister. Good job with explaining ichika's recovering |
Dead Pann chapter 3 . 1/28/2014 I read the short story Flowers for Algernon once. After reaching its climax the brain has the potential to slowly deteriorate down to basic instincts and eventually death. ... I like how you're pacing the story so far. I would beta for you if I could, but sadly I can't do that yet. You haven't even made any glaring mistakes; all I can see are a few words that either have missing letters or are mixed up with homonyms, words that sound the same but are spelled differently, like counsel and console. |
Dead Pann chapter 2 . 1/28/2014 It's actually possible to survive being shot in the head, depending on the trajectory, where the bullet hit, and the bullet itself. There's a Game Theory episode all about it. ... About damn time Ichika got his head out his ass! He needed to put his foot down a long time ago. ... I have my own theory of how Tatenashi might be the girl Ichika ends up with in canon, but I'll keep it to myself for now. |
Andrew chapter 3 . 1/27/2014 Good work what'll happen next |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/26/2014 What does he mean when he says "jug her" |
Andrew chapter 2 . 1/26/2014 Which chapter is suppose to be on the right spot |
lajoie21 chapter 2 . 1/26/2014 where is the chapter 2 because the chapter 1 is the same of Infinite Stratos After-story word by word , the question is where the real chapter 2 of Courtship of the Mysterious lady please? |
Blackseal84 chapter 1 . 1/20/2014 I like it a lot can't wait for the next chapter |
Andrew chapter 1 . 1/16/2014 I'm interested in what happens next |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2014 I like where this is going Update soon |
Redstar Henry chapter 1 . 1/13/2014 Interesting, a courtship suggested by the Mysterious Lady? Sold There is a lack of Ichika and Tatenashi centric fanfics so don't be discouraged by lack of reviews You could work on the grammar though for example "I have decided to make you mines" should be make you mine instead But overall, interesting story plot Good Luck |
Subzero001 chapter 1 . 1/13/2014 I kind of like the dark plot... so Ichika has PTSD and vengeance streak like "The Punisher" his physical wounds would be healed by his IS. He doesn't have room for romance, schoolwork or a future until his twin is dead by his hands hu? in your fic Well I wish him luck in that since it seems by the LN, Manga and anime's he's basically below average beginner pilot a failure in most eyes. but this is fanfic so he can be reinvented. Just a fyi if Ichika was shot in the head at point blank range with a decent caliber gun he got canoed, but his IS is the original white knight reborn so... /shrug |
Crimson god of death chapter 1 . 1/12/2014 finally |
PlutoGenesis chapter 1 . 1/12/2014 The plot seems alright, but what i liked was Tatenashi's last line, and now i am partiallyy hooked. Good luck with the next chapter. |