Love the story but makes no sense to me Diana accepts help from a mans kingdom, Livius, that she isnt on good terms with instead of her husbands.

So basically this is another 'Clark Kent is a half-wit despite his super brain fic'

Honestly that is disappointing...I like the way this story started

My guess is that you're a city kid. ALL of the 4-footed animals are "barn animals." Chickens, ducks,& geese are kept in coop-type buildings. Grains and soybeans, once harvested, are kept in silos so that the product can dry out before being sold. Some farms specialize by raising turkeys or pheasants. There are many different kinds of farms. If you are in the USA contact the 4-H for basic background information (reporters call it "research"). You have numerous grammar errors. With 70 chapters I suspect that you will have a great many more. Poor grammar slows down the pace of any story. Poorly educated readers might not notice poor grammar but then they might not notice hints or clues. Oh, if you live outside of the USA (& possibly Canada on a guess) I suspect that farm management is different in your area. When it comes to reading for entertainment I can read at 500-1000 words per minute...unless the story doesn't quite "hold" me in which case I have to take breaks. I've taken breaks.

We're given the golem version of Diana again. Ho-hum. DC did the same thing to us when they cancelled the demigoddess version. To add insult to injury Aphrodite & Athena are blackmailing Hippolyta into submission. We want to see SM & WW come together but this way seems a little tainted.

Is the truck electric or do you have no idea how internal combustion engined vehicles work? Sometimes the tiniest of mistakes will trip you up. Why does Clark have only 1 superpower? Why have we skipped ahead 10 years? Will there be flashbacks to fill in the blanks? When one makes changes to an "accepted universe" everything must make sense. When the Original Star Trek came out there was a tremendous amount of emerging technology & Gene Roddenberry had to tread very carefully to stay realistic. The exception were the "transporters" because the best possible special effects crews of that time could not make a giant spaceship convincingly land & take off from a different planet each week.

Another good story lost into the abyss of no return.

I hope that you could upload a new chapter.

I was hoping there won't Lois Lane. I hope that she won't be love-triangle drama wheel

Oh no! Where's the rest?! What a cliffhanger to leave this story on? I really hope that you'll be continuing this. You've come this far it would be a shame to leave it incomplete.

P.S. It seems that you forgot that Clark had already used his heat vision before his fight with Zod. When it was first triggered he was having 'exciting' thoughts about Diana. Diana then helped him with learning how to concentrate and direct the heat vision to a specific target during their honeymoon in Smallville.

Thank you for sharing.

I hope that you will be able to find time to continue.

How did the perpetrator get through the Green Lantern core in Oa not to talk of the entire contingency of royal guards that would have accompanied reach world leader in the galaxy to get close enough to shoot Clark?

Many questions. Hope there are answers.

This was definitely dragged out. lol. But worth it. Alright, going back to reading to find out what happens next.

Uh oh! Jimmy. Sigh...how long until Clark learns the truth?
The plot thickens.

Hi, my name is Eduardo and I'm here to tell you not to stop this story she's one of the best I've read about Diana's relationship with Kal, I started last month to read and I loved every word you write, you gave a great description of how their relationship is. I'm looking forward to the next chapter 3

Hii! I just finished read this story and I really love it! I know it's been a while since the last update but really hope you continue with it, you have a good one story here. Greetings! And Happy Holidays!

*clears throat and taps the mic*
mic check. mic check. okay, ehem. so let me start off first by saying WOW. This is brilliant. sorry for not reviewing every once in a while because I'm not used to getting my reading concentration broken. anyway, ill just put all my thoughts in this comment. I really think the story started in a great pace until the last (you should update soon hehe). it was nicely executed. The plot's excellent. not fast. not slow. just right. though i saw some plotholes (i forgot some of them) and i dont mind them. even the greatest of writers get those. this'd be a great comic -sighs-. So far my favorite character is Lara (shh shh apart from Kal and Di, of course. . . and you cant blame me if i find Jor-El as hottttt. he's a total dilf -dreamily sigh-). alright enough of my perversion, Lara's absolutely amazing. She's like a Kryptonian version of Diana. Kal and Diana's first meeting made me giggle like an idiot. Even better when you included the 'you're strong; i know' part. ICONIC!
oh and I also like your Lois. One of the things i love her is her impetuseness and brashness (jumping from buildings to get Kal's attention is an exception. she's a lil btch in the comics). And Jimmy, of course! cant forget Jimmy. Are you planning to pair him up with Kara? huh, im curious. this is the first time ive seen this pairing. looking forward for it.
ive got a few questions, so while Kal was on earth, did he never develop his abilities better? i mean, he never discovered he could fly and shoot light beams out of his eyes? second, im curious, in this au of yours, was Diana not blessed by other gods like Hermes ...? Cause I was intrigued when, instead of flying to save her from her fall, she needed Kal's help. I guess not ...? since Athena And Aphrodite had to blessed her powers after her ascension to the throne as queen.
one more thing, *jumps excitedly* is Diana pregnant? i mean im so happy for them also worried. they're in the middle of an upcoming war and i dont think the baby would survive the term if things got out of hand. also, if you let me, can you let me the one to finish Zod? He's a complex character to write, isn't he? your Zod's ruthless. i can see he'd do everything to get his plans achieved. great job!
this story if yours is a worthy read. I hope you'll update the next chapter! all the love! God bless!

pretty god stuff they should make this a comic