Reviews for On Steel Wings
Gopnik123 chapter 3 . 7/13
Bruh this shit is so good why'd u stop
Weebshitt chapter 2 . 11/11/2019
the writing is fantastic
Ninja6345 chapter 3 . 5/26/2019
This is cool. Neat. Intriguing. I am very much enjoying this story and the thoughts it provokes. The fact that everything seems pretty well put together is very nice too.
Shade chapter 3 . 12/15/2017
This has been a pleasant story to read and I hope that you continue with this story again. Looking forward to the next chapter.
The Rupture chapter 3 . 5/25/2017
Hahahhahhahahaha how stupid Great Red Equal to Types lol ORT Alone would Decimate The DXD verse, you can Pit The Entire Dxd verse Against Counter Guardian of AlayaShiki of nasu and she would crush them like Bugs, it would be over in seconds and The Types are Alaya that she can't even touch them.
Ado Edem via Slash Emperor would kill Ophis and Great red in single blow
Roxas fleur chapter 3 . 4/7/2017
i want to see the reunion between azazel and shirou
slatedfox chapter 1 . 2/12/2017
Great story, no idea why you disconinued it. Think you had great potential with this one
HikaruWinter chapter 1 . 3/28/2016
Sirzechs against a Type Mercury. That, I have to read.
Denial of Nothingness would be pretty compatible with Shirou, too *tilts head*
Aoko Aozaki RULEZ! Also, Zeretch, you troll, I enjoy your trolling way too much! I might just start to question my suspicioulsy lacking sanity while I'm at it...
And in this comment you now understand my extremely random trains of thought.
ARSLOTHES chapter 3 . 11/6/2015
Hope you decide to rewrite this fic soon and update some of your other fics
Parks98 chapter 3 . 10/7/2015
Lol imagin PJ Poseidon finding out what he did to rider/medusa
Parks98 chapter 1 . 10/7/2015
Kinda want to argue that canon shirou would be thrown into a world that is basically in the age of gods. You know that is huge, hell as far as I can tell an average human is like an Olympic athlete during that age. A Mage who has the ability to make his body even better and would e able to summon NP and reality marble ( dude that is easily a skill that would be ranked as lognius)...well I know you've read a demon lords hero.
ZE Bri-0n chapter 1 . 9/15/2015
People tend to forget that Cannon-Shirou has the potential to kill just about anything supernatural, if he just applies his melon property( I'd call it a brain but, well, he's Shirou). He can replicate the materials and powers of Noble Phantasms and Mystic Codes in a different shape or form. Enkidu Sword, anyone? Combined Rule Breaker-Gungnir? Spear/Harpe-Gungnir? His father's Origin Bullets( if he ever saw them)? These are a number of powerful weapons within his grasp and yet... nada. Plus, there is obviously no Gaia in the DxDverse, and it's still the Age of the Gods, so Shirou would be a fuckton stronger( higher mana quality and quantity, greater efficiency, less pain, greater mysteries, less resistance, no degradation). Any magus would be.
Biblio388 chapter 3 . 4/8/2015
Interesting way to introduce them to this world. Definitely enjoy how you go about getting FSN characters to the DxD universe in the stories that have them go there. Have enjoyed reading this story and look forward to reading the rewrite when or if it comes out. Also looking forward to reading your other FSN/DxD story, Knights and Swords.
Biblio388 chapter 2 . 4/8/2015
Very cool chapter. Like his interactions with the two girls, as few as they were, and how you are mixing the powers from both series. Definitely a cool idea for a story with an interesting plot. Can't wait to read more.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/4/2015
Hope you update this soon.
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