This story is fantastically well written. I'm really happy to see an update! You've done a great job on building up the Fable universe and characters. I can't wait for the next chapter!

What's the contest link? Tried looking for it but couldn't find it.

Nice bit of action here. Good job and keep it up!

When I saw the notification that this was updated on my email I almost squealed with joy. It's been too long! Anyway, I'm really starting to ship Aurora and Ben Finn. His little jealous looks and comments are adorable and I can't wait to see who she ends up with.

Love how articulate you are. This is so interesting, I can't get enough! Can't wait until the next update!

Again, I loved how you portrayed the game's scenario in your own manner, twisting a little and adding in a bit more. Also, that part about Aurora thinking about choice was good, since that's the whole backbone of the games.

Nice. Liked your spin on the meeting with Sabine.

I was going to base this comment on how i totally ship walter with Sparrow, but then that last bit. WHY? WHY WOULD YOU DO SOMETHING LIKE THAT?!

IS IT BEN? OH I HOPE ITS BEN! I LOVE BEEN! BEN IS JUST GREAT! ITS BEN, I CAN JUST FEEL IT!

I'll wait for as long as it takes. (:

This story is wonderful although I'm very interested in knowing if we'll see Elliot again? Only assuming Aurora's choice was to keep Elliot alive instead of the villagers.

Excellent job. Love the idea of gauntlets that can switch magic.

You have to keep going! Just keep swimming just keep swimming! I love it so far!

Interesting and wonderful start to the story! I like how you just put us in the middle and went from there, can't wait for more!

Keep going!