I think youot tonys voice perfectly from what was going on in IM2

Love love love it. It's beautiful. But not only this one, I read all you IM fanfictions and each one is heart flutteringly beautiful. I got feels from every single one. The "Stark and Potts:An Archive" one was so unique so, was the "Bits and Pieces" one. And the words you use just lovely! I hope you don't mind if I post you fan fictions as reccomendations on my blog. Also I am starting something called "Author Appreciation Tuesday" wherw I will suggest pepperony fan fiction authors so I wanted to run by you if it's okay if I give your name? By the way, my blog is .com :-)

I loved this. I love how you interpret Tony's voice. I could hear him in my head rambling like this. This was a great wade through his IM2 psychology. Well done!

I think your usage of first person (Tony PoV) was pretty cute. It felt sincere and not annoying (usually, first person stories annoy me for some reason). And yeah, the second movie had a lot of good stuff to work with, and it's nice that you attempted to elaborate on Tony's perspective. Good job!

Looking forward to reading more of your IM works.

VERY well written. Loved it.

Wow. I never thought much of the reasons behind Tony's actions in IM2. The anger and denial. It made sense. Next time I watch IM2 I'm going to have this fic in mind and see it in a new light. BTW you managed to write a very believable Tony :) Thanks

Is it save to assume you've been inside Tony's head? No? Well, but this totally feels like it! I read the whole thing with RDJ's voice in my head (yes, again) and must say you really nailed the first person pov completely. It usually comes out kind of skewed - but not with this fic so all the more kudos to you for another great story!

I think it's perfect...loved it

Thank you so much for this work ! I always like Tony's soliloquy or monologue about Pepper.

You captuured Tony's inner voice pretty well. I loved it

This is perfect! I love it! It must be hurt for Tony after his almost confession in Pepper's office, but again, he hurt her first, so...

Great fanfic as always!

Hm, this was interesting. Iron Man 2 was a good movie, but it felt a little bit distant as compared to the first, so it's nice to get a bit of expansion on what happened.

I'd like to imagine Tony is narrating this to Bruce