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Wow! After all that and the Council still rejected the relationship. What a shrewd bunch indeed! Glad you added that; unexpected outcomes are the best. I liked how you left us with questions to be unanswered like what will happen to our dark couple. I think it should stop here, but I'm not against a sequel. Shakespear would be proud of the last words from Sebastian.
*Alois' death was epic btw; first time I've ever read a fic with something like that occurring. I immediately thought of Hamlet. Very rare does one couple betrayal at the time of death and the body immediately exacting revenge. You may have started a new trend to be used in other fics.

That...was...just...awesome! Totally unexpected which is what I needed! Loved it!

Awe Undertaker is sweet to the core. lol but I must admit Ciel is so...repulsive and cynical in this fic. I know it's part of his OOC but my gosh! o.O) anyway, I'm at a loss for words that the reapers didn't mourn his death, William, and found a probable cause for his death so in a business-as-usual way. Poor Bassy; at the mercy of an uncontrollable master. I can't wait to see he and Grell united in a passion inspired ending. Until that time comes, I hope Alois can help to put Ciel in his place.

wOWOw i thoroughly enjoyed this. It is funny that Grell could be patient but that's Undertaker's humor lol any battle involving Sebastian killing William over Grell I'm all for (I hate William) looking forward to the next chapter.

I cry still for poor Ronald. I hope things take a wild turn in the next chapter.

Wonderful! Simply wonderful! Update soon!

Wow, that was cold heart, Ciel. O_O
Nice chapter!

everything is getting all atangled here!

I'm loving this story so far. Especially chapter 4 and 5. It reminds me of my own story. Except Sebastian isn't tortured by his master. Update soon!

spicy and demonic. seasoned just right. who likes a lenghthy flashback so you were right to shorten it. i so want to know what happens next.

lord! all the old gang is showing up!

boy-i am sure there is a line forming to kill ciel!(& sebastian would love to be #1)

ciel really has changed(& not for the better)i hope he learns some manners & civility also

nice start