I know what he meant. he meant that he and peter would probably murder any dude who took advantage of her beauty, thus landing them in jail. at least, that's what I think he meant.

Just to answer the question you posed in the author's note, Ed was talking about sneaking the rings from the old Ketterly/Kirke house in London. :-)
Okay, now for the story.
I liked Edmund's simple explanation of beauty and how he helped Susan understand it. And though Susan's fussing over another girl's comment is totally childish (feels like a couple situations straight out of Little House on the Prairie!), I like that she /knows/ it's childish. And I liked that she applied what Ed taught her that day on her wedding day. I also liked the frustration I felt in the line about how she wanted to look like the actresses she saw and the humour in Ed's line about picking out her shoes.
With a bit of cleaning up, this would be an even better read. (For example, you introduced Susan twice, there's a line that's definitely first-person, and a few spots that are too detailed and/or have info we could better digest in a different way.)
Nice and fluffy, just how I like my sibling stories. :-)
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The ending was very beautiful, and the whole thing was very well written. The moral was pleasant and not over-done. Just one thing... The dialogue. It was weird. I'm sorry, no other way to describe it. It felt like a non-english speaker was translating it into english, and it didn't feel like that in the main prose, so I was confused. I would recommend reading your dialogue out loud to see if it sounds natural. Apart from that it was great though! :)

I love it it is so sweet and well thought out xx I also love the sibling fluff x

That's really lovely. :)

Amazing story, and quite accurate to the character's personalities. I liked it! Though, I don't have any good guesses as to what Edmund meant, but I could tell it was essentially, "We'll be there for you no matter what."

Nice one-shot. But I've got no clue what Edmund meant.

I looooooooooove this story!
Did Edmund mean that he would fight back the boys from Susan and end up in jail because of violence?

Well written, my friend. A few grammatical errors and perhaps some punctuation mistakes, but the story was good overall. :)

I liked how you decided to do a sibling fic with Edmund and Susan. There isn't nearly enough of them, which is sad. Considering Edmund and Susan do seem to have a tight platonic bond between them. The fact that it ocurred just before the crash makes it bitter-sweet. I do like it though. It shows that even though they didn't agree with Susan's decisions, they still loved her dearly and wanted her in their lives. (People seem to always try to paint the relationships between Susan and her siblings as to be in total collapse. Which is sad and perhaps overdone too much.)

As for what Edmund is referring to, I can't say for certain. I feel like I am missing something, and I now feel the need to figure it out.

Oh before I forget, nice touch on having it end with Susan going with her natural look on the day of her wedding. She really did grow a lot between her family's death and then. I wonder if it's possible to find out who this person is who she is marrying.

Overall, nicely done Zahra.

Good job