| Reviews for Tears of sorrow |
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David chapter 1 . 7/20 What the hell is a panger? |
salmanyellow1236 chapter 1 . 12/24/2018 It was a little bit embrassing for me, but it's still a good story to read, thank you :) |
Dulcinea chapter 1 . 10/28/2018 DIS IS BEAUTIFUL I CRIED SO MUCH OMG |
LucasTheHybrid24 chapter 1 . 9/25/2018 Good Story! |
VatitaDeko chapter 1 . 3/24/2016 Hey! Your story is sooooo make me sad but it full of romantic!_ i want to cry but i holding my tears(because my little sister will see it and she will say"sis are you ok?" Then she will tell my parents*_*) At the epilog you says that the po have to stepdown the dragon warrior its cool! You make it same on the serial kung fu panda,no fanfiction(that i ever read) is saying that po marrige then he have to step down as the dragon warrior,its not the same with the serial of kung fu panda but i still like it_ ANYWAYS...!YOUR STORY IS AWESOME!please...do more and tell me when you did made the other fanfic story of po and tigress_ |
BMimms chapter 1 . 10/25/2015 Great story loved it. |
Davross chapter 1 . 9/10/2014 I know it's been a long while since this story went up, but I still feel like I should review. This story was absolutely wonderful. In every way, wonderful. You captured the proper emotions perfectly, the layout of the sorry was just amazing, and everything blended together just perfectly. If I had the chance to edit this story, I would simply re-publish it, without changing a single thing. I was dangerously close to tears(My eyes really did get a little misty.) in all of the spots where it was intended to bring someone to that point, and I couldn't help the smile that made itself well-known on my face. This story was overall just plain wonderful, and I absolutely loved it, all the way. |
Fast As A Shark chapter 1 . 7/8/2014 Considering the circumstances, I can see why Tigress is a bit OCC in this. But she did have her reason, so that's understandable. |
IceAgeFan chapter 1 . 5/24/2014 Aww I love it! That was so cute and emotional...You always impress Solar, good job bud |
Miss Lib93 chapter 1 . 5/23/2014 I liked this story. My eyes teared up when Tigress was talking to Shifu and I chuckled at the 'pangers' part. Good job. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/22/2014 I LOVE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH YOUR STORY AND PO TIGRESS.I AM TIGRESS |
M4dG4rl chapter 1 . 1/19/2014 It's beautiful and touching my heart. Love both of them YEAH. Poor Tigress. Glad Po managed to comfort her. She realized that she's actually not alone. Surounding by everyone who loves her... ah,,, that's a happy life. |
KungFuPandaFanatic chapter 1 . 1/13/2014 Good story my friend! I thought it was pretty sad and sweet at the same time becuase only the gods know the kind of life Tigress endured and how empty of love it was but with the help of her panda she saw that her new family would always be there for her and that they love her to death especially Po he would go to the ends of the earth for her! And in the end it all worked out no more tears were shed by the tiger only smiles and tearful joys were brought as she married the dragon warrior and became a mother of two panders :) and reconciled with her father and brothers and sister! That's the way to go! |
MusicalNinja15 chapter 1 . 1/12/2014 Aww... what a sweet ending... I enjoyed that a lot. I enjoy all of your TiPo fics. :) I really liked your narrative voice on this story, and the plot line was pretty good too. The best part had to be when Tigress told everyone that she was glad that they were her family. :D I would like to give a few little tips for the future though to make your writing even better! First, your tense is a mix of past and present tense. Sometimes it throws me off just because you switch back and forth very quickly. Usually, you do the past when the characters are speaking and present when you are describing the scene. Here, let me show you how some sentences would be in past and present tense: Past: Tigress looked to Po. Present: Tigress looks to Po. You have to pick one tense to do the whole story in, so if you pick past, which is easier and simpler, most of the actions and words would end in -ed. Example: Inside the student barracks, Po fixed up his favorite noodle soup for everyone, he poured it in six separate bowls as the Five, except Tigress talked with one another. If you choose present, almost every action ends with an -s. Example: "I love you Tigress," Po says. "I love you, too." Tigress replies. Do you get it? Sorry if it is confusing, I'm just trying to give you a few tips regarding the format of you will be an even better writer in the future. To learn more about the present tense, you can read books like the Hunger Games, or the Divergent series. They are all in 1st person present. So yeah... kinda ranted on there. But I wanted you to know the difference, because sometimes you mix those two tenses together and it is confusing on which direction you are going with it. I understand it fine, but I'm really just being picky. This was a cute little story, and I really look forward to more one-shots, you are seriously REALLY good at TiPo stories! :D Your fan and friend, MusicalNinja15 |
Dues12 chapter 1 . 1/12/2014 that was amazingly sweet sad and romantic great job keep it up |