I'm not even really that much into SnK but I thought I'd give this story a try since I love some of your other stories.
So far, the same stays true to "On the Edge of Nowhere"

The characterisation is spot-on, I love how everyone stays in-character despite your story being an AU. Often you see AUs with characters who share names with their canon counterparts, but have barely anything in common. I'm glad this is not the case here. Also, kudos to you for thinking up a setting that hasn't been done to death before.

The dialogues between the characters are gold and Eren's thoughts about everything made me laugh a few times. Especially his meek behaviour towards Levi, with everyone else he tends to act like a cheeky brat but he's afraid of him. To be fair I'd be scared too, even more so in Eren's situation.
I'm wondering how exactly these two are going to get closer. Can't see that happening as of right now, Levi certainly doesn't have a high opinion on Eren! Can't fault him for that.

I hope you'll continue writing this story!

I absolutely love how this story is written! It's witty, funny and sarcastic! It reminds me of how I would write and how I talk!

Hey! :D I finished reading your fic a while ago and seriously, people, this incredible piece of writing needs more reviews! Yeah, I needed to say it ._.

Well, to sum it up, I love this fic *-* It's very detailed, but I enjoyed reading every part of it, it's well paced :3 I already have seen fics with a coffee au theme, but never with Levi as a sadictic owner of a bakery, pretty interesting though.

Your writing is almost flawless, I just noticed a couple typos I think, but nothing horrible, cause I already forgot them x3 Oh right, I need to quote this line "Think of it this way, I was Anne Hathaway and Levi was without a doubt Meryl Streep." OMG WHAT IS AIR DAT MOVIE HAHAHA I actually stopped reading, I lol'ed so much xD

Well, I'm really curious about their relationship and how you will develop it c: I just want them to be lovey dovey and have a really gay wedding xD jk but don't forget the smut, cause it's M rated, right? RIGHT? ._.

Yeah, I think that was it. I'll be waiting for another long chapter. Keep up the good work! :D

Can't wait for the next update! I was so pleased when I heard that you posted another chapter.

-SimGrin

Oh gosh I can't wait to see what the papers entail and basically Eren has become a eren boy I luv it! So can't wait for more, and don't worry Eren it's either going to be you or Levi that falls head over heels in luv with the other and it will be glorious!

Oh this is going to be sooo good it's just like AoT where Eren is put in Levi's hands it's awesome! So can't wait for more

finally they meet! I can't wait for the next chapter.

-SinGrin

I love this! Please keep writing more!

Ah. Gosh. I love AU's. And there's like, only a handful of snk au's. So im giving you my love.

*-* cool, suuuper cool

This seems interesting I want to see where you are heading with this.