| Reviews for MHR - Errand Day |
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EsTeLweNadia chapter 9 . 3/11/2014 I love it very much because MaRinKa is my favorite threesome! Thank you so much for writing it! More Rin angst, please! Or Sick!Rin. XD Please don't mind me. Anyway, this is very well written. I enjoy it immensely and will definitely enjoy the upcoming chapters! Ganbatte ne! 3 |
jewel-shards chapter 9 . 3/8/2014 Oh gosh i love it. This was a cute chapter! Wait a min ... is this the end? I totally forgot to check to see if this was the final chapter before reviewing! And since I'm on my phone, I cant scroll up. Ah! Now I'm not sure what I should say! The confusion ... oh well, if this isnt the final chapter then I'll be on the lookout because this is so amazing and lighthearted and sweet. And if this is complete, wonderful job. I'm adding you to my favorite authors and alerts *.* |
Guest chapter 8 . 3/6/2014 Is it bad that I want to see Makoto get into an accident as he goes to get the mackerel? Even though I don't like it, I really want to see that happening. |
jewel-shards chapter 7 . 2/22/2014 Oh my gosh the freakin mackerel. Haru's attitude needs to be addressed in the next chapter *nods head* Poor Mako he's so sweet and Rin is so ...so Rin-y (cool or something) and Haru's all mad and bratty with everyone. It feels like he doesn't even like Rin haha. I'd really like to find out whats up with him. Anyways, I'm getting really involved in the story which means you're writing is amazing. I like how easy this is to follow. I haven't gotten confused or skimmed around at all which is something I hate having to do when my brain is connecting with the writing lol. |
jewel-shards chapter 6 . 2/22/2014 That was probably one of the best descriptions I've ever read. I felt like he was winning the gold medal and could finally rest after putting the last item in the cart D Aw, Haru is sweet in an annoying way with the chocolate bar for Makoto. I feel like something is going to transpire though :0 |
jewel-shards chapter 5 . 2/14/2014 Wahhh another chapter *0* Haru is such a brat and so spoiled lol It's funny how these two bicker with eachother. I loved the part where Rin pretty much forces Haru to push the cart only to realize that Haru is really terrible with that kind of thing. Makoto is like the peacemaker of the relationship it seems. It's cute really. |
Sky Blue Hunter's Soul chapter 5 . 2/8/2014 I burst out laughing about the poor clerk! Bet that poor soul has some stories he could tell, eh? I still adore this series to pieces! It's one of my favorite Marinka fics! |
jewel-shards chapter 4 . 2/2/2014 "I only answer to the call of water" lol oh no that was well played by Haru. And they're starting their errands now, yay. Makoto is so sweet ] This was a nice little chapter but it was soo short! I probably always feel that way because I love reading this so even if you make the next chapter longer, i'll still feel like it's too short so it doesn't matter lol. I feel like the boys are going to run into some little mishaps while running errands. Especially with Haru and Rin! |
jewel-shards chapter 3 . 1/28/2014 This is great. I'm so glad I found this story! I can't wait until the next update! |
Sky Blue Hunter's Soul chapter 2 . 1/18/2014 Ahhhhhh I can't get over how perfectly and adorably you write the boys! They're absolutely fantastic! I love this story to pieces and I patiently await the next chapter! 8D |
Sky Blue Hunter's Soul chapter 1 . 1/11/2014 This was absolutely adorable! I loved this so much! I hope you write more Marinka, they're my babies too And you write them wonderfully! Definitely more please! |