Fang C.C.

NelCornelia

Hm, Speckles behavior fits his personality however it is difficult for me to to accurately review him as his series of appearances were pretty brief. But as far as portraying him it seems about spot on. Just missing his droning monologue XD but maybe that's a good thing.

First iff I liked the part in French, that was an interesting twist. I also liked how the dialogue was realistic, with people stuttering and using slang, makes it seem more lifelike, rather than having characters that drone away in unrealistically structured sentences. I like that there is a rich amount of content but I tend to be one who enjoys shorter chapters, I just like having a break in between but that's just me, over all nice work man :)

I guess its alright, but best to see how the rest develops although I have some concerns about certain interactions.

Well...that first chapter was definitely very interesting. The writing is excellent here and the way Lelouch is portrayed was really quite awesome. I loved how the Code Geass characters were incorporated. Since this is a crossover, there were some characters I had no clue about, as I do not know much about anything that's Final Fantasy (except for some of the characters, like Cloud and Tifa, but that's only because I'm a Kingdom Hearts fan.)

WAIT! Lelouch is married! What's he doing kissing another woman! You cheating playboy! I should jump into this story and beat you senseless! And when did you get so good at sword fighting and stealing? We know that you can't fight Lula-chan! This guy must be an imposter! What have you done with the real Lelouch! XD

Anyway, I enjoyed this first chapter and plan to read more soon. Looks like it'll be good. I am a bit wary about that M rating though. I'm not a fan of anything really explicit, so I'm hoping things will be somewhat tame in later chapters. Right now though I am most definitely interested. I know you don't pick up the work on the chapters until chapter 9 but it's obvious that you've got excellent taste, so when I have more time I'll definitely read more of this. Best of luck!

wow that was weird it is gross and how is it she get caught I mean really wow who gets caught well trying to tell a lie and at that trying to get away

why did u change this bring it back to black flag im luck i saved this story in my favs.

please mix the next chapters too
I want to read when your story going to take place and update soon

please tell me that Lightning will be part of Lelouch's harem i would love to see them together and awesome job with the story so far keep it up

it's a good thing that you combined the two chapters together
are you going to combine the next two chapters too ?
thanks for the fast updating and update soon
yes it is a really a good chapter

I missed this story I love it so much
thanks for continuing it
it's a good start
and don't forget to update soon