This chapter is great. It gets to the point without needless details and it fits with the idea of lost and found. It combines good suspense - Victor stalking and grabbing Robin with strong human interest- the conflict between Robin and Patrick over her desire to go help Jason. Furthermore you get a sense of how both Sam and Jason feel about whether or not to get back together after being apart. Unlike the television show GH this story is balanced because it shows Patrick as a man with reasonable and legitimate concerns about Robin leaving to help Jason. At the same time its more than fair to Robin. The show should be as measured and balanced as this really good writer. Great Job !

This chapter ties in well with the first. You need both to make the plot work. Just one could not have done the job. I do feel sorry for Silas but there is no way I would want Sam with anyone else.

Love this story! Please continue :)

Bring back jason please. You could have Sam and jason reunite.

Better than Chapter 11 its a really good view of domestic life with a small child. Its not easy but they're getting through. You can't help but wonder with a Soap Opera theme what will happen next. Good job.

This chapter is not as exciting as the previous one. But its good and you need the transition.

The writer does a good job of portraying court room drama. You can feel the tension between the couples fighting over the child. While we all are cheering for Robin and Patrick the writer does not make the Meadows seem like bad people. You have to feel sorry for them too. Its a good chapter.

What I like so much in this chapter is the way Sam is shown doing her detective work. Its full of suspense it made me wonder if the Meadows would catch on or if Sam would blow her cover. Another thing is the tension between Patrick and Chris it just feels like they could get into a scuffle any moment. Summer is really so sad and touching. This chapter like the other I reviewed is well put together. Its a good story line. My only criticism would be to break it up into paragraphs so that it reads easier.

️This story is so good️

I just found this story and so far I love it. I can't wait for Robin and Patrick to find their son. I wish this would've happened on the show. Keep up the great work!

This story is well thought out and I like it. However the writer needs to keep going. There is too much going on to stop. Keep up the good work !

Love this! Please continue :)