Hi, here I am!
What can I say? The story is so very beautiful, that's what!
When I read the first chapter I immediately thought that I would have liked this story so much, and I was right!
Simply brilliant!
The basic idea is very interesting, and you have developed it well, you have been able to exalt this fabulous couple, and I am grateful to you, because I have read a good story, and it is very easy to read, but surely this has taken so much commitment, so thank you!
I've never published, but I also write stories, so I know how long it takes, including corrections, second thoughts, choice of words, etc.
I know it takes a lot, but if you update I am sure that all of us who have read the story would have been so happy 3
Obviously you are the author and decide what to do, but I just want you to know that you have the complete support of all of us who loved your story madly!
Once again thank you, and you are very good!
Kisses,
BoaRobin

Aww, finally the kiss!
Who knows how Kidd felt about kissing a guy like Law ... let's leave it, pretend nothing happened!
Anyway, I must say that my salivation has increased during this chapter, I love to eat and the description of all those delights made me dream hahaha (Kidd is a lucky boy ...)
You won't believe it, but when I read the part where Law stared at Kidd as if he were the steak, I was drinking some water and I was practically strangled.
Come on, how do you resist a look like that? I can only imagine ...
Anyway, I can't wait to read the next chapter, I love it!

Okay enough, this chapter has stretched me, too good!
First I laughed a lot when the mouse man appeared, because "mouse man" reminds me of a "spider man" and the association in my opinion is hilarious :)
Of course, his flattery made me vomit (really ridiculous), but let's move on.
You can't imagine the face I made when Law said those things about Kidd's hair, and when he checked his bandage my eyes turned into two hearts.
I'm loving the story, there are so many elements that I adore and you are a good author, I have to tell you!

Hi, it's me again :) As expected, the second chapter is also very nice 3 I really like how you introduced Law, as you described him to us through Kidd's eyes: a very rich boy, but who nevertheless didn't turned himself into a piece of shit spoiled like many others.
I have to admit, I smiled when Kidd got tangled up and could only say "shit" and "fuck off", because that's exactly what could have happened to me (I confess you that Kidd and I have a very similar character . )

I must also say that when Kidd realized that "his interviewer is very beautiful" I was like "and you realize it just now?" and when he said that Law has a beautiful smile I melted like a snowman in the sun, because it's true ...

Anyway, I know that the proposal of Law can seem quite strange for Kidd, it's understandable, but I'm sure that when they clarify everything it won't be so bad and I have the feeling that Kidd will accept (or at least I hope so much because it would be really interesting to see what Law meant with "company" ...)

Having said that, I really like the story, even though I'm only at the second chapter U.U.

P.s. when Kidd had asked Law who he was I had imagined a scene where Law suddenly became serious and with a solemn expression he replied "I'm a little pretty gummy bear, embrace me" Lol (I'm crazy I know haha)

Hello! I'm an Italian girl, so please forgive my pitiful English, I'm still learning it (I'll try TT).
I just wanted to tell you that the story so far seems really nice to me, the idea is original and I like the way you write.

I am very happy that in this story Kidd is joined by Wire, Killer and Heat, because having already seen them all together in One Piece, seeing them together in an alternative universe gives me a strange feeling, very beautiful though, as if they were always some kind of family, in any universe (I am very strange, I know, forget my senseless reasoning, I just wanted to share it with someone, even if I'm not even sure you understood what I meant -_-).

As for the chapter itself, I found it a good start for a good story. Obviously Kidd delicate and refined as always, but hey, that's why we love him, right? I confess, I started jumping around the room when Law finally arrives and says "Eustass-ya", because I've always loved this way of calling people, typical of Law, especially when he turns to Kidd hehehe

And nothing, I just wanted to tell you what I think of this story (up to now, but I'm sure it can only improve) and tell you that I'm really happy to have found it, also because KiddLaw is my OTP and it's always nice read new fanfics on your OTP. I hope I didn't dwell too long, just that I'm used to writing long reviews, I hope I haven't bored you. That said, as soon as I have a minute to read the second chapter, I can't wait!

P.s. I know the story is a bit old, but unfortunately I found it just now!

Aaaw I love your fanfic, I devored it in two days! :D If I was to say something about your writting, maybe you put a bit too much description in little things, but really its nothing, You're great! :D I am dying to read the next one! Thank you!

Oh please don't make us suffer any longer! When will you be able to update your wonderful master?! I love this piece so much! Anyway, thank you for all your work! *gives thumbs up*

It appears you has a serious case of writers block here. Hope it passes soon. Because AwsomeStory.

Please tell me you are coming back to this soon? I read it when you first posted it and when you got to this chapter. I wanna see more. I write too, so I understand how long it takes.

Thanks for being awesome. :)

Please update sensei... Its been so long that the story have updated. I jzt finished reading it; again. So please update. M waiting... (Round Big Teary eyes)

So awesome a starting, can't wait to read more.

Hope you keep up the good work.

OMG MYSTERIOUS BOX Whatever could be inside of it?!
Just started but had to say it.
So far so awsome.

Aaaah the laat chapter was light, fun, and sooo... Lack of Law. I really would like to see where this is going. And since your last update is last august I think I would really have to be patience in this... Waiting game heheh. *pun intended*

Anyways, this story is such an amazing work! You should know that I did not dare to eat just for the sake to put this story down. No, no that's unacceptable. I love this story sooo so much! Definitely one of the best KidLaw fics out here!

Thank you so much for writing this, and if you may, please continue. *bows deeply, half begging desperately*

OH MY GOD I AM IN CHAPTER 15 AND I AM SOOOO HAPPY AND SAD AT THE SAME TIME. i only left with one chapter! Why oh why *cries*

Anyway great story so far. I like their interaction, and KID REALLY WHY ARE YOU BEING SUCH A LITTLE SHY! Come onnn!

Pardon me while i'm crying while reading the last chapter.

This is so amazing. I am only at chapter 6 but I already love it too much. Way more than I allow myself to.

This piece is DAMN AMAZING. WHY AM I TAKING SO LONG TO FIND THIS? WHERE HAVE I BEEN?