No .It woldn't .Just showig care,showing that you are with food provably fish test and curing the wound is is the and will he got? Create More of the The story.

Nighshade is a blue nigh fury raised by wolves .She had hard time with humans trapped fighing with other dragons- defeatted monsterous nighmare in those savage shot should be very powerfull usually by rage and big some other known provably to Toothless/toothy.

Is this nightshade

this is interesting. i'm exited to know what caused to roar. okay, I'm going to keep reading now :) on to chapter 1

My finger slipped to the review button just,, I never quite finished, sorry about that. I was meant to say that you did a great job of introducing the characters to Osgar and vice versa. You have continued writing with detail and description and im really enjoying it! I love the parts with Ruff and Tuff. I really enjoyed reading what Osgar thought of the dragons I'll be reading the further chapters when I get chance.:D

I think you did a really good job of introducing the other characters to

Wonderful! I enjoyed reading how your character pecieved Stoick and will enjoy reading what he thinks of Hiccup. There are a couple of small mistakes in the writing, but it's nothing that can't be fixed with a quick tweak. Despite this, I'm not put off reading this at all! In fact I have found that I actually really like your work.
Going on to the next chapter now, :)

I really enjoyed this chapter. I love how you've written it so that it starts on a completely different note to the prologue but indeed ends up linking. I can't wait to get started reading this next chapter, I have so many unanswered questions about this shipwrecked boy in my head- so read on I shall!
Good work! :D

That, my friend, is how to ace a prologue. I love the mystery shrouding everything and the way everything linked together perfectly, this definately left me wanting to read more- so that's exactly what I'll do! I really want to discover what happens! :D

Ah, so Mr. Osgar is going to get his own Night Fury. Yes?

Great chapter though I think hiccup would have been slightly more suspisious of Osgar because of the last shipwrecked "friend" They had on the island. But other than that I really love this chapter! You know what I would love to see? Osgar get a dragon of his own! I think it eould be really cool. Anyways, keep up the great work & update ASAP

Oh my gods. I LOVE this story I think you pretty much nailed characterization! Especially hiccup! I love it!

Fun to read. Is this Thornado in front of the Throne? We shall see.

You're getting great a leaving cliffhangers! (How dare you!)
Once again, you've grabbed my full attention and I was really focused on reading this chapter. I could picture the whole situation.

I like Osgar, he really seems like a good character. I'm assuming that he'll be the one to bond with this... dragon? Just a guess, although I can't wait to find out.

Great, other than the occasional grammar error, this story is perfect!