This was an unfortunate reflection of reality, unfortunate in that it happens far too often still. It was written well, not so much in terms of spelling and grammar because there are many mistakes in that, but in tone. It made me tear up a bit at the state of the world we live in because I wish that hatred like this would truly only be seen in fiction. Thankfully, there is still hope and love out in the world and you managed to show that in your story. Thanks for that.

Wonderful story, it was a realistic story that not most cover.

Very, very, *very* (emphasis on very) well written. The growth of Shikamaru throughout is really inspiring. Cheers 3

P.S. Been loving your other stuff too, but I've been (admittedly) too lazy to review until now.

I loved this story

I really liked this a lot

Thank you for rnot only writing but also posting this. It's a beautiful story that so many need to understand and just don't or can't be bothered to. I loved reading this and I love the ending, Shikamaru's lucky.

There are several typos in this story, thou I can't recall where they are.

That was sweet oh those boys deserved so much more than what they got them sick assholes.

This story was an invigorating read.

Yeah, Shitty World.

***Pyrane***

I really liked the story and had even cried a little. Also, I've read your other stories too and think that they're great. Keep up the good work. :)
p.s. ShikaNaru is definitely one of my favorite pairings ever.

Beautiful.

this has to be My Shika/naru story as far!

This made me cry. It's sad that it goes on everywhere, not just movies or tv. I am going to have my teens read it. They love Naruto and hate judgmental people. I think this is a great way to help spread that message just a bit further. To see how one little thing can build and to show how so many turn a blind eye to what's going on.
I only wish that there was something in the story about Ino learning what her past action did and being remorseful but...no actually I don't care. The story is just fine without her, she wasn't really there when Shikamaru needed her so pffft.

Great story. I absolutely loved it. The writing was fantastic.

I really love this one! I love how Hinata and Kiba sat with them at lunch. Shikamaru and Naruto are so cute together! This so far is my favorite in the series.